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Old 01-15-05, 05:41 AM   #1
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ME CALAMITY AND DIABOLIC THIS IS FOR OUR A.I DEMO HOPE YALL LIKE IT HIT MY SOUNDCLICK
i left feed on young duke ride wit me
tha q dont mean no queer
and spul hip hop
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Old 01-15-05, 05:48 AM   #2
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dayum lol tight beat in my opinion...

Cali - hittin em multis hard man nice flow quality is good
Calam - dayum man u got the fire in the song ahahah tight flow great quality man tight shit
Dia - the quality could be better but the words are lyrical dopness... tight flow man

overall the song is dope in my opinion.... i seen a spark of fire flaming in the middle...lmao.. dope track 8.6/10....
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Old 01-15-05, 06:03 AM   #3
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aight the intro was nice....

aight good shit cali

i see you are finding your style

CALI: just keep working on that style....nice lyrics as always...nice spit man...i see you have alot of emotion...damn nice


CALAM: damn man you are like always ripping tracks...nice....i like oyur lyrics and your metaphores were hot........just about everything oyu spit got my attention

diabolic...nothing really got my attention but solid flow prety nice...but qaulity was not as well as the otherd on the song...just work in quality

all in all preetyy nice....dont really give out numbers but what about this....1118274744 out of 39745759 lol

but yeah good hsit
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Old 01-15-05, 06:03 AM   #4
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Cool ass track on the real...i was listenin to the lyrics and each verse was consistant.
This is one u can close ur eyes to and let the semi eerie track guide u to the mood of the song u know? lyrics fit the mood of the tune of this track.
Good work yall!

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Old 01-15-05, 06:17 AM   #5
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^thanks to all who gave feedback nice to know yall like it
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Old 01-15-05, 06:36 AM   #6
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Cali: hit them multis hard and fast. Good verse

Calam: Good flow, hot metaphors. This was cool

Diabolic: Cool aswel. liked the flow.

Good from all yous. I see the reason i wanted in AI is right in this track
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Old 01-15-05, 11:44 AM   #7
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cali- u did good on this track..

calam-killed it with the metaphors, i was feelin ya verse mos def

diabolic-you fell off at certain parts but i was feelin ya lyrics mos def..

i liked the beat you all had picked for this one, overall nice collabo.. stay up, gentlemen..
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Old 01-15-05, 04:51 PM   #8
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yo im listenin....and the intro is tight,first verse had real tight flow,delivery,and lyrics was on point...second verse is also dope..it gotta a tight flow and delivery,lyrics again on point....thrid verse also had good flow and it was pretty tight...nice beat choice also...so overall dope track
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Old 01-15-05, 06:02 PM   #9
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^thanks for the feed that means alot since i dont know most of these people thanks
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Old 01-15-05, 06:19 PM   #10
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nice shit. pure classic. everyone had a great verse with good vocabulary and multis. pure fire. 10/10.
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Old 01-15-05, 06:21 PM   #11
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pretty good song i liked it a lot but it would be better if quality was better... but i still like it good job
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Old 01-15-05, 06:23 PM   #12
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da beat was tight as fuck i like da echo and some of the parts i like the wat it was about shit was mad crazy the beginining was tight and the end was to the whole fuckin song was good big ups cali 9/10
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i think its really good...

^and quality is fine(to bomber z) i could understand all the lyrics thats all that matters for me the flow is good and beat too
great job to all 3 of you...

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Old 01-15-05, 07:05 PM   #14
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^thanks final i agree fuck a quality we aint got no equipiment we do it how we can its clear and understandable at least
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Old 01-15-05, 07:25 PM   #15
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Cali....Keep readin bro.(really cant tell u record every line seperatly)
Calamity.....Metephores, spit, flow, nice...real nice...wrong people to collab wit tho
Diabolic....Sound like ur in a toilet or summin....however u flo better than cali.

Calamity.....ahhh....phoenix....
just make this solo....so I can D/L it an drop it in my car. -1
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