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Old 01-11-05, 11:56 AM   #1
Optimus
Picasso Of Poetry
 
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Butters is free! text/poetry.

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yes im free, just accepting nice crews that have earnt respect through dominace, activity, and above all skill...
if i sound like the type of dude your looking for then drop your crews name.

heres my battles that are currently open.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...29&page=2&pp=15

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171451

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171243

yep...i know i delivered weak, but im capable of more...much more.

and then heres a little bit of poetry i presented to Dabatos..

My life doesn't seem complete without you company.
Scent's of rose's billow off your body, and stress my mind.
Vision's of me and you, run back and forth through my head.
Because i feel something for you, i have never experienced before.
I look forward to the day, when i can wallow in your personality.
And become close to you, share our feeling's and share our passion.
To think rational, would just be grinding my mind all about your feature's.
Word's cannot express my emotion's toward you, i just need you to know.
That i'll forever respect you, whatever and wherever life takes you.
Be there as a friend to console and heal your pain, and frustration.
Or upon your decision to metamorph into someone more than a friend.
Every waking moment, your essence is imprinted on my thought's.
And every time i close my eye's you are all i see and all i want to see.
Ringing you on the weekend, but you never answer upon my attempt's
Yet, you converse with me for hour's, but i get shutdown like withered roses.
I dont know if youre posing,i just cant detain the feelings that need to surface.
Give me a reply, to put my hopes to rest, and let me live my life with you as a companion.
Push my boundary's to contain you in freedom, and treat you wisely.
So, before you pass judgement, i just want you to know my view's.
That every soul, me and you, should become close, and become Two.
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