The topic: drowning in ur dreams

It seems like years since I have awoke,
for every breath I take it more then bulk.
Seeing you torn from my life,
and having no wife is more then what I can bare,
So take me from this bed and you give me no snare,
fuck this mike I am threw with this dream.
for it is like I have been running in some type of beam.
my dreams where good and my whole life I never understood,
for I wanted to be a artist where I could be known,
but now it seems like a dream where I own no phone,
to pocket 50 cents for a phone call or even fetch a dog a bone.
But now my life is gone and I am not other than,
drowning in my dreams.

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