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Old 07-18-02, 06:15 PM   #1
synickle
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"next Step"

IP: ADEC 56AC

this is my next advance on a lyricist stance,
to enhance the circumstance by any given chance,
i'll inhale your upscale with the every detail,
it's blackmale, cuz i'm like a warfare chain reaction,
with a fraction of faction i present an abstraction,
hit you with a practical tactical,
as a free faller scholar,
amp your cramp to defeat the champ
with a plan to scan your attention span
but your hollow head is like an empty death valley
even worse, you claim you know the game when your courts a blind alley
overall your protocol is just an overhaul
so i'll unlace the human race to get some breathing space
while backtrack an amnesiac so he can slack his attack off crack
disable the unstable till it's just a warning label
call me the gab grabber rapper that babble at battle
and sprayed a crusade with the first aid grenade
but it ain't portrayed cuz i don't charade
it's a custom made hearing aid a decade delayed
with the plan that outran the blue and red superman
just call me a rhymin medicine man that began a lifespan
to soothe an earache with the syllable earthquake
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Old 07-18-02, 11:36 PM   #2
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i like this dawg you kept it nice and simple but phat at the same time. flow was on point and propper multi usage in the begginning.

keep postin

now go reply to my shyt slum flow
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=17122

i'd appreciate yo

1ne
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Old 07-19-02, 12:28 AM   #3
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this was good.. ..came out nice with tha openers, after that it was koo and then it picked back up from the middle to end.. ..

"this is my next advance on a lyricist stance,
to enhance the circumstance by any given chance,
i'll inhale your upscale with the every detail,"

my favorite bars from your verse.. ..keep spittin


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