HIT THE SOUNDCLICK ME AND D.V WAS TALKING LAST NITE AND WE WAS TALKING ABOUT FINISHING THIS TRACK SO I DID SEVENTIRD IS ON THE HOOK DONT SAY SHIT ABOUT THE QUALITY I GOT A 8 DALLOR STICK MIC WITH A GLOVE ON IT JUST COMMENT AND LEAVE FEED ON THE SONG ONCE WE GET SIGNED WELL DO THE QUALITY BETTER CUZ THIS SONG IS IMPORTANT TO ME AND D.V

I LEFT FEED IN THE FOLLOWING SHITS
DUCK-LOVING YOU
ACUITY-230 FADED FREESTYLE

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Aiight I peeped this track and must say...CALI, you were right about the mic quality being kinda weak, $8 mic, $50, $300 mic...either way you look at it your lyrics made up for it cause no matter what kinda mic you used for this track, you ripped it dawg.
I think its dope that you could put somethin out this good. Not that all your other audio isnt...but besides sound quality this was godly...best ive heard from you yet and will be waiting to listen to more...

I thought this was ehhhhhhh.

First verse I hated, like a lot. Chorus is coo, doesn't seem like a chorus at first. Second verse was better lyrics wise but the quality was ASS. I liked that line about you bein in NY while he sittin in the oval office, real talk. Beat was ok, not really my taste. I think it was just average, emotion was nice though.

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i say this was a good track....i said before oyu need to find a style but i think this is your style.......its good lots of emotion........you need a better mic...just go out and buy a 50 doller mic.........but good shit.......i ddint know oyur where muslim......but yeah.......good shit.....seven third was nice with the hook.......

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

i wasnt really feeling dvs part i think it lacked
empires part was dope this is the first song of his ive liked lol
hook pretty good lol can u imagine emire if he grew a beard lol

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why was 7/3 on this? lol i liked the chorus doe
i heard DV's verse b4, cali it was ight, hard to hear everything u saying cuz quality, t's and s's muffle it up. flow was ok from both. but pretty good song despite quaility

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

listenin
quality could get better but no worries about that
verses have a sick flow,delivery,and lyrics are all on point
this is pretty hott so
overall a real dope track

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^thanks i see its all good feed as most of my recent songs have had guess ive elevated greatly my shit gets more replies and views then any 2 thirdself tracks combined lol anyways thanks again for the feed fellows especially kaveh you always check my shit out i appreciate it sun

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I didnt like it.

Flow was off.
Delivery was off.

Still got that hangin on the end of each line.
Can tell you record each line seperatley. Your dub's are off as well.

Keep up the good work. -1