im fuckin pissed at this faggot......










welcome to Heinz Field, the home of the pittsburgh greats
where unpredictable wind plays a factor when the ticks burn late
seasons in Doug Briens hands, his chance to hit a game winner
he looks 47 yards down field, goal posts suddenly became slimmer
kick rises in the sky and seems perfect, but looks can deceive
its right down the middle, but does it have the distance it needs?
nope. it falls short, Briens self confidence drops to the ground
pigskin is turned over to the Steelers, theres no stoppin em now
but offensive coordinators thought wrong, a costly misconception
an interception on the first play of the Pittsburgh possession
this could cost them the game, a nearly perfect season at stake
16 ticks left, every Jets fan suddenly became a believer of fate
last week Brien won it , its destiny if it happens twice in a row
Steelers fans stand freezing, praying and hoping he'll choke
nervousness overwhelmes Doug as he steps back on the field
the thought of losing his career in the back of his mind is concealed
steps up to win it for new york, boots it, too much power behind it
flys wide left, one play sums up a career, and for him this one defines it
in a matter of a second or two, hes the most hated man in the city
one week hes clutch, the next week were doubting his kicking ability
the game goes to Ot, the Steelers carry every bit of momentum
a 33 yarder for the win, and Pittsburghs kicker dont miss em
the Jets choke is the story, its the home team that advances
the kicker should be fired, he cant come through on second chances....



i forever hate this fucker........ Fucka Doug Brien

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lol hahahahaha this is dopeness go STEELERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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lol^^^^^^^ uppin for some feedback dammit

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damn...dis was dope as hell...perfect topic, vocab, structure, everything!...i was really feelin dis shit homie...keep it up...10/10...GO PITS!!!

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^thanks alot......................uppin for feed

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Go Pittsburg Hahahahahahhahahahahha

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lol i loved watching that game, one of the best games of the season if not the best... any way this was pretty good... some places could have had a better rhyme scheme to them... other places seemed a bit out of place but all in all this was a pretty good drop... i respect that.. lol great topic tho... good drop id give it a 7/10 as far as open mics go....

thanks ^^^^^^^^ uppin for more feed

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