True Passion Lover II

my true love is like a full grown rose but without the thorns/
wearing my heart on my sleeve you can see that it is already worn/
from the ups and downs winter snow and the summer rains/
I cant get you out of my system like my souls is trapped boudn by chains/
I love you girl more than anything I know and I hope hope holds you in my arms forever more/
Your bodies hitting like Roy Jones jr/
well can i get knocked out/
I wanna show you something let you know what im about/
*heres a thought*
A nite of passion me and you doing the love tango outside till the morning/
i hear thunder and feel electrified but im here forget the warning/

*as it starts storming, the animal savagery is reborn inside us*
your hairs wild, red and black pieces of the blanket are flying everywhere/

im touching your -ish and i feel your stomach jumping -this must tickle/
look in your eyes, licking your neck and just let my love trickle/

down
down
down
to your inner thighs ... to that special spot only my love can reach/
at first i was a rookie but its only a subject you can teach/
me how to burst open the dam in your heart/
let the flood gates of emotional loose on my city/

dat was hot boi. i've neva disliked ya stuff. i think i like love poems more than regular ones...dat might be why i like dis so much. but yo, i really was feelin it and i like ya style. i wanna see more.i was really feelin tha last 2 lines.much luv
oh and check out my latest "then and now" and tell me wutcha think.

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Definitely feeling this piece more than the pre-quel. You a freak tho. LOL. Keep poppin' out pieces. Holla.

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