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07-19-02, 10:01 PM
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battle verse need feed back
IP: 4884 48D4
YO YO LOISEA ima take away ya emcee rights i have you so scared of me you only come out at night/winning this fight oma do it wit ease i use punchline afta punchline to bring to ya knees/"Freeze, bitch" i have you shivering in fear wit that weak ass flow that might as well be a cheer/tears, they'll be pourin though ya eyes when you look at the votes they will equal up to mine/remind me when this battle is ova cuz i got you i lock down like a wittness of jahova/you suck more cock and balls than bill clintons hos,i bet you signed a contract to do vanilla ice's flows/your voted most likely to be the most wackest mc thats why peeps wipe you out in battle while brushing there teeths/i think you should jus give up now or even betta throw in towel,of bein a rapper you suck so bad i think i might have to end ya chapter/this battle have come to an end so loisea get ready for my win/. [I]
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07-19-02, 10:13 PM
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IP: B5AC E74C
... this was a disapointing... all that it was wasn't anything, i can tell you know how to rhyme... in a not so orderly fashion... all i can do is advise that you rhyme something different... or not rhyme at all, no beef or REAL disrespect dawg... but that's how it looks for me looking at this... crookedly, poof
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