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Old 02-07-05, 12:53 PM   #1
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Pair-A-Dyce- Stressed

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This is my last track I'm posting on message boards, anything else people will jus have to check the soundclick. I was goin to post it at RB but I dunno, maybe I will but I haven't posted much here so ya'll enjoy.

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Old 02-07-05, 08:14 PM   #2
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Dope shit man.. fa real.. i really like ya and your style.. pimpin homie... keep it up
One of the few cats here on RV that i can actually see makin it in the industry wit a lil bit of voice work and better quality.. ur style and everything fits well for todays industry...
Holla atcha boi.. nice.. 1
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Old 02-07-05, 09:51 PM   #3
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rofl @ that sig

thanks man, maybe I can get my deal this summer
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Old 02-07-05, 10:07 PM   #4
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This was one of the worse songs on rv










































Oops is my nizo dyce...lol am fuckin around...shit was nice u been too much stressed son...get at ya boi
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Old 02-07-05, 11:36 PM   #5
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Figured I'd return the feedback

Not sure what you are doing with your voice....sounds like you just put a dub on it the whole way through. This kinda made it sound like it was a chorus the whole way through.....not sure if anyone else thought this though. You seem to have a really safe flow, almost elementary.....especially with the laidbackness of your voice. You should try being al ittle more daring and switch up the flow a bit.....keep us intrested. I liked it, just thought it could use a little work.....keep dropping em
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Old 02-08-05, 02:09 AM   #6
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I use doubles because my voice sounds like crap solo. This song is not how I normally rap, and there will be no more droppin them, I'm done. Thanks for the input
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Old 02-08-05, 06:56 PM   #7
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You sound a little bitter. I was just trying to give you some honest criticism, I thought you deserved to have someone be honest with you.....don't take it too personally
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Old 02-08-05, 11:02 PM   #8
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no I'm not bitter, I was jus replying to you. i understamd what you meant
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