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Banned: Biting
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KO-Cain vs @.
IP: DE75 E6F1
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20-30 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting topical-ruthless Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 02-03-05 at 02:18 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
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IP: 90A6 6876
@. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 10:49 PM.
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IP: 90A6 6876
Ruthless
Adjective: without mercy or pity (Example: "An act of ruthless ferocity") As i live this life,just growing of age, Things around me are confusing,so im stowing my rage Once its unleashed,i stop caring for you and everyone around i snatch the purse of an 80 year old lady,watch her fall to the ground I grew up in the surroundings of hate,no love to be shared I was allways the type of person,to do what im dared A bit of alcohol isnt the reason im like this Murder is just a hobbie,I dont need to be rightous never back down,from even the biggest of person Im never sitting in church,could you vision me cursin I live life twisted,in my invisible maze some ask me to stop!! I say "im just living my days" my moneys floats out my hand,quicker than its snatched in Sideway's round corner's,fuck being strapped in lifes calling me,but its in the back round distant I feel like I know it all,But dont care for wisdom I guess i know how the teeriost's of a plane were thinking damn!! spiritually we must be linking cause I could of been the pilot that day I would of found it fun,to end my life that way |
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
KO-Cain has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 12:14 AM.
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
"Ruthless" Journal Entry #15 -- "Sick of it!" Man.. When will the murder stop? Its spreading rampent.. Were dancing with a develous breed, making advancments.. The plan is, to take crime off the streets, but fuck it.. My dear beloved... Cops will always be out-numbered.. See, stopping the violence is called; pure insanity.. Profanity.. Humans need war, peace is blashpemy.. To some, but son; the sun shines too bright.. Its time to get wise, not spark minds, I'm lighting the fires.. Supplying desires, of many you just need to see it.. The world full of stupid minds, that need to be hit.. Dont see this, as a wake up call, son the truth is.. Hold your own; cause the whole world is fucking ruthless.. "When you live life on the edge, all boundries of whats normal suddenly become irrelevant. Survival mode takes over". Journal Entry #17 -- "I just shot a man" Look, People dont always go, by what they say.. I heard story's, but to have it happen, I'm in dismay.. I wished the way his face looked, would drift away.. Fuck it, I wish I just forgot the whole fucking day.. If something played, out different maybe I woulda chilled!!.. But it didnt, and the resault? ...An old man was killed.. Yeah.... -But thats the past, no changing what went down.. If I could re-arrange one thing, I'd want god around.. For me.. Cause if I got nothing to die for.. Then whats it all worth..? Think about that.. Final Entry -- "I'm stressed. Goodbye." Uh huh.. And think about ya pal; the guys in prison now.. Not really living how, he planned his vision out.. When he started life.. It was hardly trife.. But now? My two cents, this is hardly life.. Fuck it.....Everyday theres new beef, on who's chief.. Of the institution I'm kept in, I knew we.. Had no chance of living in a system controlled by.. Crooked cops, ruthless people, while I strolled by.. Before I was electrafied, with a certain future.. I find.. Being ruthless was the only way I'm used to.. Used to.. Used to.. "You learn your entire personality from when your young. What you learn, and the way you see people interact.. Will stick with you. If a child grows up around violence, they'll grow into violent people. And nobody's gonna change that". Think about it.. PEACE. |
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Aiight nicly done.
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Better than you..
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This was feedback posted for KO-Cain
IP: 01C3 560C
word dope shit. keep that up mate you will be a top head on this sight.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
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Banned
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IP: A1EC 8B20
Voted For: KO-Cain
danm u won hands down.... ya verse was preety long but a good read u got into details u had ya twist in the story u was getting deep into details that keep me wanting to read the rest and then the introduction to each seprate verse help a little bit i thoughtN the ecko-at the end it was like i actully herd someone saying it used to used to * HEY WHO DA FUCK IS THERE* nah but it was creative and everything fit right to me and flow weell one hella topical verse here..... 9.0/10 @ ya verse was short and sweet * no homo* the begining started off kinda weak, 80 year old women ECT that was kinda simple minded thoughts, u feel me??..... im not hate'in but ya creativeness was lack'in in this battle but i thought this bar was hto thou... never back down,from even the biggest of person Im never sitting in church,could you vision me cursin that was simple but with a message inside it that kinda hit hard even thou it was still simple... ya read was sorda enjoyable but none the less it still was a good drop nice battle fellas.... vote: ko-cain.... |
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This was feedback posted for KO-Cain
IP: A713 E6BC
I just wanna check polls..
KO-Cain's shit was mad tight though.. |
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 6FF2 C222
werd, props to Ko-cain on this one. I under estimated him.
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Uppin.
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Uppin again.
Not many people are into voting huh.. |
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Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Voted For: KO-Cain
Very nice battle by both @ come nices as always Ko-Cain come deep aswell... I felt that Cain's verse was more complex in the way he had hott word play, Nice flow a bit choppy at times but made up for it. @ droped nice and would have beaten a lot of people with this verse but I just felt that Cain a bit more deeper. @'s best linez.... I guess i know how the teeriost's of a plane were thinking damn!! spiritually we must be linking cause I could of been the pilot that day I would of found it fun,to end my life that way ^I felt you close the verse up really nices with this good drop man. Cains best linez.. People dont always go, by what they say.. I heard story's, but to have it happen, I'm in dismay.. I wished the way his face looked, would drift away.. Fuck it, I wish I just forgot the whole fucking day.. ^Floorless flow, nice word play great verse. Both come really dope stay up,... Vote ~ Cain |
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...Belong...
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IP: B1A5 868C
Voted For: KO-Cain
I think that KO-Cain got this battle because i feel that KO-Cain came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt KO-Cain got it was effective and was on point @ u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to KO-Cain good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to KO-Cain and flow and structure i'll give to KO-Cain. V/KO-Cain There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly...within 5 days (normally 3 days but battle hasn't started yet) and yo nice job for a new guy
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