I replied to Lamar-dont start nuffin.........
and DarbytownHu$tla-sumshyti...........

I need Money & daddy dont want me totake the same road he chose//
cuz y he was in jail masturbatin//
i was in my room contemplatin//
debatin on wether i should pursue the career thast in my blood//
or keep rockn air payless's like a fuckn dud//
at 13 i bought a bag of bud//
while other niggs was gettin high//
i was cuttin and sellin it jus to get by//
50% oregano and 50%sticks andseeds dat was my plan to succeed//
da money bought jordans,avirex or anything else i need//
I eat sleep and shyt hu$tlin//
da nigga 6'2 240 lbs. always musclin//
but nowadays a nigga gettin money dont have to cut my shyt//
its always been M.O.B so fuck a bytch//
I will neva snitch//
fucku & ur mans have u layin in a ditch//
i dont pitch rocks//
i done shot glocks//
run up in niggas cash & stash spots//
time is money and im always on da watch//
fo DEA and dem bytch ass patrol cops//
i buy weed by da pounds & quarters I chop//
fuck a gang i dont crip walk or hop//
4 the '02 dis Va niggas on top//
all day chillin on my block//

This wasn't a Bad drop...Ya rhyme scheme was Way Off...You should have thrown some met's and multi's in there...Cause without them ya spit was simple...felt what you were sayin though...keep elevating

what is mets and multi's cuz i just spit what i live and try to makeit rhyme in da process

Metphors and Multiples...I understand you spit whats on ya mind...Everyone else does...But adding Elements to your Spits makes it better...Cause right now you just saying words...Anyone can do that...But you add Methphors,Punchlines,Multiples,Rhyme Scheme, (etc)...Niggas will feel you Even More...Feel Me

i feel u dog

Dis Yung Nigga be from da Hood//
all day me and my niggas we be up to no goo//
erybody say what we doin is wrong we jus missundastood//
i would tell u how da game works if i could//
if u aint bout dat money den my nigga u should//
got erything u need and 4 da bytches i also slang dat wood//
ucan call me sosa, Hu$tla or jus plain ol' D//
no matter where i move to im still dasame ol G//
my minds playin trickz and its really startin to worry me//
still small change not quite movin keys//
im tryna make my cheese//
while im hidin from da dee's//
i know the money,dope,hoes thing is gettin old//
but yo das all i kno//
and hard times like bein po'//
and realizin dat ill nevasee my grandma or my uncle no mo//
it really aint all good when u got dough//
u will know ur real friends when dey catch a charge like da fag derrick off of Blow//
im intimidatin dogg like suge& ThaRow//
i dont sellnuffin less den a dime ho//
u come at m im coming at u das how it go//