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This is sumthin i wrote for this gurl in tha 8th grade, this is my first and i hope not my last poem im postin in herr so be honest kause therr's always room 4 improvement
![]() "That Gurl" By: Geoffrey Meade When she smiles without a doubt, It`s harder to tell her what i`m about Like when the wind blows And it`s just a gentle breeze I feel as if i can’t let her go I don’t beg with a "baby please" I hope it`s not LOVE That`ll only push her away But damn she is beautiful like a dove I don’t care if it’ll be just 1 day I would try to please her in every way But i hope i don’t do too much I’m a nervous wreck, did i throw up my lunch? I just wanna impress her I have love 4 her a whole bunch Like how monkeys love bananas Hold up! Am i still in my pajamas!? Man i`m nervous as hell My heart is beating like a cowbell Why can’t i tell her how i feel? I’ll try...but nothing! What’s the deal? I...i`ll stutter when i try to speak And when she replies, i can’t think! My legs get weak... My posture is getting...neat? My heart starts to beat, fast!!! My body gets heavy... Palms start sweating... And damn, what was i gonna say? ...I guess tomorrow is another day
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IP: 28AD 5545
This poem had excellent imagery... had sum nice content, seemed simple at first but it turned out well................ i wasn't feeling teh line about the pajamas much... but overall not bad at all...
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
thanx, i was in the 8th grade, and that was when evry1 wore pajama pants wit sum Jordans or Air Foces, basically a lil trend, but yea. Good looking ma much luv
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IP: 408D D2A2
nice poem man nice imagry and......it was short and sweet......keep it up......i hope to see more fam.........
also post the link in our link thread for our crew so our crew will see it........ return the feed on my poem...... links in sig peace~1
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IP: C3B8 31A6
4 sho uppin 4 feedback
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
yeeahhh...i thought it was dope...um work on...nothing..just keep dropping them aiight fam...plus that was in the 8th grade so im sure you can drop something better...im lookin forward to our collab wit Franklin...pz..
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IP: C3B8 31A6
hell yea mayne tha collab is going to be off tha chain!!!
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IP: CD09 4AB6
No feed 4m no 1??
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
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IP: CD09 4AB6
I got 42 views and 8 replies
Dont sleep on this plz! If u want more of me, then let me kno wat u like and dislike! Holler
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MilLioNaIrE GaNg$tA
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IP: 88A7 9627
hey my nigg u know who thiz stoner be nice work imagery nice
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Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 3207 13E4
yeah...dis is iight my nig...im feelin it...case closed
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IP: CD09 4AB6
good lookin ya'll
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IP: 28AD 5545
Man That Poem Is Dope But Im Not Puttin It Down Or Nuthin But It Almost Seems Like A Play.........anyway Keep It Up Man Its Cool
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