Check In By WENSDAY Or Topic Wont Be Given Poems Due By FRIDAY NITE 12 PM EASTERN TIME. Edit You Link With At Least 2 Other Poetry Battles In The League You Voted On Voting Ends At 12 Eastern TimeON WENSDAY NITE NEXT WEEK.no Line Length And Dont Write A Topical. This Is A Poetry League I Will Dq You If You Write A Fucking Topical I Hate That Shit Its Not Poetry!!Gotta Actually Win Good Luck To BotH
YOUR DROP IS EXTENDED UNTIL MONDAY NITE AT 1159PM EASTERN TIME SORRY I FORGOT TO GIVE YALL A TOPIC SO THE TOPIC IS-FAST LIFE

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

checkin in.....check check

Livin life in the fast lane
Young kids enterin the thug game
Not knowin thats completely insane
If they fail, our tears show the pain
We feel when their blood is washed away by rain

Then we take a look at the flip side
When young girls' hopes and dreams are cast aside
It's amazing how well they try and hide
Their disappointment but then they find new pride
When their child first sees the light

So who are we to judge the right path
When different people have a different grasp
On the life they lead, whether it be slow or fast

Yo the fast life,
Stabs like a dull knife,
as i say good by,
*zoom* good night,
Fast is Regretfull,
Life is what a havent,
and i got a handfull,
nothing is relevent,
fore this life quick,
this roller coaster makes me sick,
in all a whole,
i dont need to be told,
life to quick to fold,
this is not poker,
this is life on a different token,
as the pressure of this life leaves me broken.

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

umm wow...thats all I can say about Solja's poem
That was really bad, I'm not gunna lie, I didn't see anything good in it.
Prodigy came with some idea and it was by far the better poem
I don't think I have to say much more

vote/Lyrical Prodigy

both poems sucked smh .. both were waaaaaaaaaaaaaay too simplistic poetry is supposed to be filled with emotion imagery all intertwined in metas and such and here i didnt see any .. the topic sucked too fast life smh .. but my vote goes to lyrical prodigy i think he kinda grasped the topic better .. lyrical solja tried to hard to be deep but wasnt at all ..

vote-prodigy

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i agrre lyrical prodigy won this hands down and this the last day for votes battles go up tonight!!

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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
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