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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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Breathe Remix~Village Pimp ft. Anxiety & Indeph
IP: 0525 222F
{anxiety}
No chance of success, all my friends got doubts... But their right, i got eyes to big for my mouth... But their amazed at how far I'm extendin a buck... I'm dissapointed in myself, for dependin on luck... Need to find a way, of getting success in my range... Need to find a way, to not be depressed an deranged... Confessin my pain, but learning my lesson the same... When something doesnt work out, agressions to blame... It's seeming like God, is just standing by idly... But i dont need that, i need someone to guide me... So I'm stuck in the present, reminisce on my past... Because the second i look forward, i fall on my ass... Try to do something usefull, but im leavin with greif... People stompin on my face, when i'm needin relief... Too many enemies, especially when im needin a remedy... Tryna move up in this world, and nobodys lettin me... I was moving quicky to succeed, but then im patient... But the second i slow down im left with deprivation... No one here to help me, as i fumble some friends... Then I rise to my feet, only to stumble again... BREATHE!!!! Why you gotta lie to my eyes and say my rhymes ain't life... BREATHE!!!! Light the fire of Desire inside my mind... BREATHE!!!! Indefinatelly Indeph VP and Anxiety.... BREATHE!!!! This is the Remix so bitch breathe this in... BREATHE!!! {indeph} Living life half based,half baked past weight the world... smothers my bones..muffles my voice,covers my tone although.. through hard times I make the most of every tic.. bought cribs with chore money,savorin every lick.. Life's tough for all,just some been through more,some been through less, some been through sores,some been through stress,this one been through mess... but none which get's into deph, the hardship heals through age,like denorex.. multitasking,like I hope I pass it,past the oak line bastards who have no Hope I ask them to chill..whe you past them the will of their pops,then past them the bill..of there home least don't freak,the new man of the house,the son has his own key his grades fall down,he wants to make them all proud the thoughts now.raced around,till he finnaly falls down.. chill..when you see your lady, stating she's with a baby and he's like maybe, and she's like sure,he's cries lately cause he's now poor,the tears a downpoor..don't blaim the baby it was your choise not his,but his 1st question is where do his pop live. the baby needs fod,the momma got tims,and pole dancin topless as you're overwhelemed,stop this...collapse on your knees clear your head,clear your throat,relax nigga breathe BREATHE!!!! Why you gotta lie to my eyes and say my rhymes ain't life... BREATHE!!!! Light the fire of Desire inside my mind... BREATHE!!!! Indefinatelly Indeph VP and Anxiety.... BREATHE!!!! This is the Remix so bitch breathe this in... {villagepimp} Breathe in breathe out... blood in blood out... Take a breath... let these words infest you mind it's my time and it's manifested... I'm arrested by the words of yours that I invested and accepted but I'm betrayed by those I would have laid my life down for... Slayed by life and hoars... and i'm talkin' about you who made... who made me beleive cuz I paid my debt to delay my death in society... inspite of me fighting me... you keep denying me... behind my back this knife sticks deeper... inside my rhymes my life gets deeper... And Deeper... under rated and always the sleeper... lyrical grim reaper... Torn between two worlds... And burnt between your words... The stage is still set for you to try to kill pimp... but jus' lettin' you know you will slip just quit I've had enough of it... I look in the mirror see the fear I'm scared of you compared to you I'm aware & new bare & true... nobody is unfair as you... The only one I really wanna tear is you... why everybody hails to you... I don't now but Im no longer aware of crew... dispair is you... So fight for what's right... grab the mic... and... BREATHE!!!! Why you gotta lie to my eyes and say my rhymes ain't life... BREATHE!!!! Light the fire of Desire inside my mind... BREATHE!!!! Indefinatelly Indeph VP and Anxiety.... BREATHE!!!! This is the Remix so bitch breathe this in... BREATHE!!!! Why you gotta lie to my eyes and say my rhymes ain't life... BREATHE!!!! Light the fire of Desire inside my mind... BREATHE!!!! Indefinatelly Indeph VP and Anxiety.... BREATHE!!!! This is the Remix so bitch breathe this in... Chea... the kings of Open Mics... Indeph to the death... villagepimp... anxiety... The Council 2005... BREATHE!!!
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 0525 222F
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174634
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175000 yeah I left feedback...
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: 2B9D 28F8
i really liked this...
im assuming its to the fab beat...cause thats what i said it to in mah head.... all of you had nice flow for the most part... anxiety fell off a lil bit in the begining, but picked it up as it went on.... indeph had nice flow for the whole thing mostly.... vp fell off a lil bit towards da end... but all of you were nice for the most part... i really enjoyed it though.... nice lil remix you had goin there... although i dont think its really anywhere near to most of ya'lls best work, ive seen you all do better.... i liked it though, good work...
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 0525 222F
chea that's the misconception I feared peeps would have... it's not a remix to fab... nor is it to the fab beat...
It's to a tech n9ne beat and its a remix to the Breathe song that won the award in October.
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 1C81 276B
nice piece...was thinking of doing a rmeix myself but I'm lazy!
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 9C92 533D
i was hella fellin this...i liked the flow...and the rhyme scheme...i like the topic...and the fact that it all tide together somehow...the structure was perfect...overall i give it a 9/10...
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 5CCF DDDB
thanks bro & kid (Chase)
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IP: 6CB8 12EC
Upping for feedback.
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IP: 06C2 0A98
I don't know what you got against god. But I liked this drop. Just cuz it had nuffin but talent in it. I say Anxiety had the best verse. I put all that in my head and felt what he meant. lol. Nice drop. Every thing flowed well and I can maybe elevate off of this. weerd.
Nice drop. Loved it.
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 9A07 1297
thanks for the feedback... appreciated...
uppin'...
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: CF1A D121
i liked it was some good shit but why is everybody hatin' on me then when they read yours then they all say how good u are ur good but way i see it i'm atleast just as good i know i am u feelin what i'm sayin
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 3E60 38C3
Dawg... man... we put out the illest shit on RV. We didn't try as much... and many people noticed that and have said so... but it's more to it than what you might see. You may one day be as good as me or better... just keep writing and thanks for the feedback.
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Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 60C9 2BAE
yeah i was feelin dis 4real...good topic and flow of course...yall came wit some fire...still waitin for a new indeph single OM though...but still...i was feelin it....10/10...stay up...~1~
and ay...i want all yall to leave some feed in my new OM...da link in da sig...feel me?
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 3E60 38C3
I got you on that thanks for leavin' some feedback.
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New to RV
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IP: 35BE D2AB
Aiyo decent drop by all 3 of yall but honestly yall couldve did betta than dat
fa real.But its weird, dis isnt da remix of Fab's Breathe but da chorus looks familiar Oh well,If I was yall,I'd make a better one then dis cause I know yall can do betta than dis
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