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Beat Produced By: Anno Domini

1st- Detrimental
2nd- Limited Edition

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1946976
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1947025

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wtf people? no feedback!? come on now UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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couldnt really hear at the beginning...

limited - nice verse limited good flow, nice lyrics and once again this had gud emotion, quality was gud too, decent job here limited


de - cudnt really hear ya that great, quality was real bad but wot i did hear sounded alrite, lyrics seemed gud n emotion was there, shame i cudnt hear ya betta


peace y'all gud track, liked the beat

Limited Post The Beat For Our Collab On Ya Soundclick....Thx Dawg

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listenin...
beat was pretty dope guys

Limited- nice flow,emotion,quality, and lyrics were all good, you had a real good part here...nice shit!!

D-lyrics were nice, quality i think might need a little work but then again, my speakers are fucked up lol so i dunno wat it is, not bad tho still could hear....this is pretty nice also, keep droppin!

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Thanks for the feedback...

Preminition, I will PM you....

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A'ight uppin' for some more feed...I will return favors.

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1st verse, quality is bad, good flow, need to turn down the beat and up vocals a lil
lyrics... cant really tell lol

2nd verse, betta flow than u ussually have, liked it, good job wif effects and shii, maybe make ur dubs down just a tad in some spots, also beat seems a lil loud, lyrics are straight, delevery can be worked on a lil

2nd verse was way betta though overall
beat was ok, emotional shii

holla back

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

decent track yo.........heard betta from you tho
listenin.................nice beat

LE-good flow, lyrics were nice..........turn your vocals a lil up

DE-turn your vocals wayyyy up ...cant hear a lot fo ur drop or make it out

not 2 bad yo...-7.5/10

Peace
THE JURY
-AC

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ok LE did all the effect shit not me lol....do i need to post my lyrics up so you can follow along????

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Typing as I listen: couldn't understand much of jack shit in the first verse. HARD CORE net flow in the first. Q blew bigtime on that verse and the reverb on it dud more harm than good - sounded liek it was recorded with a fisherprice mic. Come a little closer to the mic and put a sock on it for future recordings - bring up the clarity and keep the pop down. Second verse - flow is lumpy. Slow in some spots, rushes to all hell in some parts, then moderate speed - all in the same sentence. Q also sucked here. Both you guys need to invest in mic's - even if it's a cheap one - just long as it's not a computer mic. They make great hammers and paperweights - but horrible for use of an emcee in training since you don't train yourself on aspects of your voice that those cheap mic's can't pick up. Some EQing is a halfassed fix since you'd be amplifying a sound that the mic didn't pick up in the first place.

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d i aint like ya verse quality was horrible lyrics and flow was weak also limited ive told you youll be dope one day and you will good flow and lyrics emotion is dope really really nice sun

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omg!!!!!!! fuck it here are my mother fucking lyrics!!!!
damnit now listen i didn't fuck with my verse all i did was record it lol....LE did all the other shit
here's my verse:

They were best friends who would've thought it would've ended this way
Chad the druggie and of course Ryan was the brain
They were best friends since their adolesence
They learned their lessons together and shared their confessionss
They were the essence of each other the fuel to a fire
Chad always the match and Ryan always the igniter
Ryan always the wire leading to Chad's self esteem
They were and iron clod they shared each others dreams
Tho from a different environment they always related
To subjects that were always commonly debated
Their friendship could never be faded always together
Always was one there to help the other thru their bad weather
They was always each others legs to their tables
Always one to keep the other friend so calmly stable
No one thought they were able to stay together and be friends
They proved them wrong but then the story never ends

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