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Old 07-21-02, 02:22 PM   #1
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"no Echo"

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Im sitting typing alone
no noise no conversation
no one but me
Guided by a Thought:
i am alone.
no calls to interupt the thinking
no words being spoken to hear
no smells in my presence
no emotions no fears
i am alone.
im sitting stagnant waiting for demise
that quickly would be forgotten
if ud only open ur eyes

I have pictures of people
and thoughts of places
no actions no friends
life makes no accomodations
im uncomfortable with life
im not at all at ease
my face simply says
dont lookat me please or ask what is wrong
dont wonder my troubles
assume nothing is wrong
keep passing me by
keep walking away
dont hesistate just let me
sit alone
no words
no noise
no anger no. no joy
NO ECHO
just nothing
but me
and silent invisible thoughts of a boy
(confusion but no echo.)
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Old 07-21-02, 03:39 PM   #2
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you are amazing!!!!! I love it, that's all I can say about oyur work, no peice is eva tha same as another one they alhave their strong points & different aspects I like how you were alone but happy to be alone & not sad or scared, lookin for ward to more, peace
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Old 07-21-02, 03:40 PM   #3
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yo i like that....deep
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Old 07-21-02, 11:28 PM   #4
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good lookn out!!!!11
keep uppn!!!!!!
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Old 07-22-02, 03:32 PM   #5
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very nice peaice indeed was feelin it for sure cept kinda was short bars and they ran together sum but PAYCE
hazy
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Old 07-26-02, 07:03 AM   #6
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I can relate to this ...
kinda trip me out coz i am alone
now ... so yea .. dope!
Diggin all ur ish boo,
madd skill ..

Pz
~1~
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