What do you think of my skills at text? I don't wanna start any beef in this thread, and I don't want people dickriding. <---I say that because someone (I don't like to mention names, so let's call him WickedClown), accused me of having d/r's. I just want you to tell me honestly what you think of my text skill. Really, I'm just curious.

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drop a verse in here....

Im an Honest man.

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The opposite of LatinKitten.

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My battle against Cannabarz...won 5-0.
My WickedClown battle is in my sig too.

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9th.. i know im part of ur voting circle.. and i ghostwrite all ur verses.. and hate vote against all ur opponents.. i still think ur nice..

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Lol and the first peronsn to take that serious is...*waits for an herbish response*

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Alright...lets see....Old School way...Jet Style.
Kids...Take Notes...

My rhymes bust and let you, get folded like a fuckin' pretzel
Canna's like honor student in remedial classes...nothin' special
dumb line.....dumb bar....
31 wins from rooks and no-shows, of course I'm not respectin'
That's why ya record's hidden, like dj's lockin' up they vynil collections
not a good personal, actually a lie. bad 2nd meta
You don't bomb vets, so I'll only wear you out once like a prom dress
User title says you drop shit, yeah, I've seen ya verses' contents
ok first line...the dress part. 2nd bar weak filler
I'll let you have it Barz, don't be a bitch like ya avatar
'Cuz you're only dope when you snort it and get strung out like cracked guitars
played as personal,dope....nah....nother played wordplay
You stepped quick, I'll get to jackin' tonite, verbally blacken ya eye
'Cuz my punchlines make state-ments...yours are just capitalized
weak punch. 2nd line was really nice tho
You're trash in the can, so don't come harassin' the man
Known for sparkin' the pot when you're just a flash in the pan
simple ryhme scheme. weak closer...
Not that good....very stretched, sorry bro...truth hurts....
now...lets see if u really won this or was just DR

watch the 'WALLS QUAKE' !!..when i get rid 'of 9th'
...................................like pullin SCHOLARS IN ALL STATES.,
you have 4000 post?..an we jus hearin of you like u came outta a CRAWL SPACE !!..
.. no really, I can't find no 'personals' on you..your the LAMEST POP..
..then again it's 9th gree.. rap verses loser, so it' EXPLAINS ALOT !!..
..stop LIVING OFF HYPE, your NOT NICE !!..decieved an get SLAUGHTERED !!..
...i could put ya rep next to pot, and it couldn't 'bubble' if u PREHEATED THE WATER !!.
this 9 is this WEAKEST , if he walked in my shoes, the guy will be FEETLESS !!..
..he has no quality, i couldn't d'i'g "ree' if you put an "I' with the E IS !!!..
your PRIDE will get reep'd bich !!...
.....................you motherin verses how you goin FATHER ME MAN?..
your goin 24-7..all you need is an ASIAN CLERK n a LOTTERY STAND !!..
cuz obviously, damn.. ur fuckin awful !..thinkin your flows HOT? ..
when u jack more shit than fucking 'manuer in ROAD BLOCKS !!' ..Keeeyyyyyeeed..

Alright....Cannabarz murder'd you.

If you won 5-0....sorry but you have some crazy DR. If this is how text goes...I feel sorry for Canna and the rest of this site that gets robbed like this. You might not have been aware of it...But yes...U have DR. and Your not that good.

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judging by your battle w/ wickedclown... well your alot better than him... at least above average-

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Only Question You Gotta Ask Yo'Self Iz.....

.Will.He.Kill.You?

nah for real though.. u've improved alot.. i still dont like ur structure.. but u come with hot punches. i think u've become a top 10-15 text head.. u stil have a lot of room for improvement.. but i think red foxx knows ur dope...

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i disagree... some of 9ths shit was hot, some of canabarz shit was hott-- but nobody got murdered.

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Only Question You Gotta Ask Yo'Self Iz.....

.Will.He.Kill.You?

Ok, thanks Jet for your honesty. I've dropped harder than that, but if I have d/r's I'm unaware of them. I don't want any, because I wanna be able to win based on skill. So please dont' d/r me, lol.

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i actually thought the only decent bar in that whole battle (well maybe a couple decent ones) but the only real one worth mentionin was that "yours are just capitalized" one... and that one had me Laughin so fuckin much.... u murdered him with that one... that was my opinion... canna had a lot of stupid lines in my opinion... just had that "crawl space" shit for double word multies, and that "EXPLAINS ALOT" line was extremely stupid.... the thing was u had no straight up stupid lines, u kept it consistent, had wordplay that led to punches.... Canna i thought had stupid lines... that really didnt make alotta sense....

Ok Im Gonna Be Real Your Wack Period Your Audio Is Decent But Your Text Is Wack Sun Seriously People Claim I Have D.r But Noone Says Im Wack And I Actullay Get More Hate Votes Aganist Me Then Any D.r Just Look At My Pliem Battle Links In Sig And Look At The One Vote Pliem Has Lol But 9th Your Not Good At Text You Need Alot Of Work And Thats Being Real Sun No Lie

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Cannabarz sucks.. Forced multis and wordplay to the max..

Damn..

That was pathetic..

But anyway..

You're alright.. In that battle i dont think you came as hard as you could have..

But i do agree with Jet on the breakdown of that particular verse..

Not to say im limiting your skill to that level.. Just that verse..

CAli....Empire....whatever...
^ your wak. . . . .

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