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Old 02-14-05, 06:11 PM   #1
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Unhappy Never Forgotten

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yo this song goes out for all the legendz of hip hop
that got popped by getting shot and one of them's 2pac
that's sumthin' that nobody forgot he was in his hot spot
when they came and took his life he was only 28 years old
and we lay back while the story was told
and i realize this shit's kinda basic
but i don't know how else to spray it and i'd hate ta waste it
knowing someday i'm gonna have ta face it
anyway this is a shout out from easy-E to ol' dirty bastard
the ones who didn't deserve ta get plastered
they all had rap and hip-hop mastered faster
and for the victorous Notorious he'll always be meritorious
never inglorious no matter how big he was
believe me cuz, and you know i won't leave out any idea
and i'll never forget to say that "I miss ya Aileyah"
so leave feedback and leave this cuz you know i need this
so never read this and leave this cuz i want to know that ya'll
believe this
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Old 02-14-05, 06:13 PM   #2
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10/10 for effort

ya stay droppin open mics an i respect that

this peice was....blah in places, but some bars were dope, you keep reeling the open mics in tho dawg, ya got some classy rhymes here in there in ya peices, keep it up

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Old 02-14-05, 06:46 PM   #3
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cool thanx man let's get some more feedback in here
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Old 02-14-05, 08:18 PM   #4
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flows a lil' off in some place but i giva 7 or 8/10
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