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Old 02-13-05, 05:13 PM   #1
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He no showed in our battle so im just lookin for feed on my verse

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Old 02-13-05, 05:17 PM   #2
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yo man i'm peeping it right now......the beats hella tight......ya flows real nice in this....i like tha smoothness in the beat man it was hella mellow...a real story telling beat....nice battle lyrics.....kept it on beat.....overall 7.6/10...really feeling it...
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Old 02-13-05, 06:18 PM   #3
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MAD mic noise at the intro. Net flow HARD. Watch your distance on that mic - vocals fade out big-time. Stay within 6" of that crap mic and keep from handling it so much since it rumbles like a bitch. Aside fomr that - on a verse this hort - that's the only observations I could make. 1
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Old 02-13-05, 06:46 PM   #4
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jea this shit was pretty hot fam...dope beat on da realz...u have a good rap voice...but ur mic is fuckin wack..shit hurtin me ears..but u got talent fam lay..no doubt

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Old 02-13-05, 10:37 PM   #5
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thanks fir feed uppin. and quality=wrote and recorded track 30 min before battle due
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Old 02-14-05, 08:22 AM   #6
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ay yo dont be runnin ya mouth about no shows and shit people got lives son but set it up and redrop and i got my cool edit shit str8 an lets see who got the better flow
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Old 02-14-05, 10:13 AM   #7
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aye bitch im just tryin to get feed on my verse. ya name got respect so i called it a diss to get more views. but we can open the battle. aint no one said i was better. just gettin feed on what shouldve been a good battle so i can elevat
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lol im gonna peep thisd battle now lol
good idea ur battle wil get closed pretty fast now but knowing tony i think hell end up murderio\ng ur verse
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ay yo when we gonna settle this?
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Old 02-16-05, 11:02 AM   #10
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its whatever. set it up. im in school now so set the due date for 1 day
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bumpin this shit up
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Old 02-16-05, 10:01 PM   #12
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whats good??

yeah you had some mic noise at the start... and you was talking pretty loud... then when the verse kicked in homiie, the vocals kinda got lower, and it sounds like if you aren't keeping an equal distance from the mic at times... but its all good the flow was nice, nice looks on the lyrical content


not bad of a performance homie...
thanks for checking out my ish dawg


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