*points at dolce*




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You Know Morbids Homing...And Death? Of Course Its Closing , As I Smash Your Thorax Through Your Respiratory System....Breathing Will Burn Smoldering , As You 'Lungyi elder!' Without Old Generations Of Burma Clothing (Lung yield Duh!)
In The Night Crags ... I Sneak Through The Furnace And Smite Fags, My Tydrant Of Poseidon Slices Your Posterior To Shreds Of Light Drags .... So You Can String Your 'Salt Watered Skin Around Rusty Barbed Wire' Then Force You To Wave The White Flag
Your Hearts Deminishing ... Ripped A Apart From The Beggining , Im So Derranged I'll Stop Your 'Souls Gaseous Exchange' ... And 'Laugh At The Ignition' , Pour Chlorophene Through Your Ears..Light A Match..As I Burn Rubber In Your Mind Like A Nascar Ambition
Im Gracing Brutality ... Laced With Insanity, Rip Of Your Whole Fucking Face..Try It On As A Mask Replacing Normality, Then Use It As A Discus To Simultaneously Throw Through Each Dimension ... Now How's That For 'Facing Reality'?
Use Your Nervous System Switches...As A Soldier Of Minutes , Leaking Seems To Grasp On To Your Intestines...Pulling It Through Your Eyes With It , Drain Every Fluid From Your Body As Your Organs Suffer A Dry Spell Like Sober Witches
Your Souls Kept Mild ... And Your Jaw Will Of Left Child , Try And Scream You'll Only Choke On Pieces Of Molars..Till Your Saliva's A Stream Of Exiles , As I Help Feed Endangered Species ... Throw Your Too Thin An Alligator Like Bullimic Reptiles
Shoot You With Iron Cast Roses...Infact Till The Essence Of Nerves Decomposes, Then 'Squash Your Platelet's On Ice' ..... Melting Through The Tube So Ferocious , Till Your 'Uvula Rinks/You View Larynx' Deteriorated Like Models Of Tuberculious
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*Kicks Over Tombstone*

Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2777252
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...251#post2777251

*does the quagmire*

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Crhyme Sindicate.....

WAYYYYYYYY To stretched..and the structure is just off...basically through the whole piece off and if this was for a battle then...it was kinda generic even for horrorcore..

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

oh i forgot about this site
lines must be setout like this
for any sort of decent feed




smh, the actual lines aren't stretched just clustered together for wording, easy to spit over a beat


dogma was right

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Crhyme Sindicate.....

Actually i didnt meant the lines, i meant the scheme it stretched out inner, outer rhymes and multi's to hell..

like

You Know Morbids Homing...And Death? Of Course Its Closing ,

As I Smash Your Thorax Through Your Respiratory System.... < This part isnt even Needed and fucks up the rhyming system as well as makes the line in itself stretched

Breathing Will Burn Smoldering , As You 'Lungyi elder!' Without Old Generations Of Burma Clothing (Lung yield Duh!)

or even just remove the "Through Your Respiratory System" part...

You Know Morbids Homing...And Death? Or Course Its Closing,
Smash Ya Thorax, Breathing? Will Burn And Smolder,
As Your Lungyi Elder without Old Generations OF Burma Clothing,

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

true i suppose i jumped to angry complaints since u didn't leave comments on the lyrics themselves

but know i can see where you coming from

appreciate the feed

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Crhyme Sindicate.....

lolies told ya.

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