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911
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Why are country’s all solemn and friendly not violent Then one decides to jack a plane to kill and break the silence Then another wants to fight back and form a deadly alliance But you know it’s always the good people who end with triumph That would be the ones who weren’t waiting for the attack Sitting back in there chairs then it hits them like WHACK! And they see it on the news and it draws there attention back To the families and the friends on the four planes that were jacked And it took something this tragic to bring our nation together We should have been this close no matter any weather I mean we were close before but now were closer than ever It’s sad that something this bad made our nation better A lot of people died in this tragedy about, a ton And the firefighters didn’t have to stay they could of run This has been a long war and probably won’t be done And I pray for all the victims of 911
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it'z a nice piece duke u got my attention on diz 1 so overall it is a 9.0/10 u got da vocab, structure & u need 2 go into depth wit ur wordplay & topics 4 future reference but good
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