yo my FIRST ever song type thing..so make feed and criticism constructiv y'all
Lyrics are available on soundclick..

I dropped feed on 7/3rd's diss on fiya and Doomsday's track -On ething
(props to DQ for uploadin this for me! )

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/realskillsmusic.htm - sense of despair

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wow,very nice,you elevated like wouah,your considared as an audio head of rv i must say,very good man,

true..but im still elevating....

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i hate ya damn accent but lyrically your pretty good flow is decent also try to use more emotion if you can doggie dont shout try to record just a few lines at a time in order to pur more emotion into it and use the 14 step process on rb ill link you if you want it holla at me on aim homie lyrics is nice beat is being killed now tmka murdered this already but you did pretty good sun

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accent - fair enough, bitch! na its w/e it fits in nice round here yo
wats the link?

thanks 4 tha feed man.........

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ok i'm listening right now....that beat is fuckin sick....ya flow was pretty good man..i was feelin in....it was on beat...you shoulda turned down ya vocals a little bit....but it was cool...was feelin this man..good job....7/10

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My Music HOE

Woah man...turn the EQ on your 8000+ WAAAAAAYYYYYYYY downn. Your T's and S's got some monsterous zing on em. The flow it self is borderline Net. Some points it's on point - a lot its off. Some lines it's just rambles over a beat - some multis and a complex rhymescheme would have saved this. I have no clue why, but I get that A LOT from UK cats. Track's got promise, but needs to have some complexity injected into it to offset them lines where it's just talking and nothing happens.

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bump..................

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im listening to it at this very moment..

The beat is pretty nice.. same kind of beat i'd use.. AT times your flow is off.. the quality is okay..but you should try to get a better mic.. the lyrics is pretty nice.. but your delivery isn't as good as i thought it would be.. just basiclly.. practice on your flow and have better quality.. but yo you christian? nice lol.. 7/10

leave feedback on mine plz

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...734#post2018734

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1) yeh im christian
2)thank 4 feed,ill check ur ish l8r man...

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indeed ill song nice job flow was pretty much on point..topic is flawless didnt know u did audio ...keep up the good work and elevate lol we all need a lil bit of it ...overall i'd rate this bout a 7/10 ....decent shit man