http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176897

This is no attempt ta say Im king...just my views....so,Read on killah!

I see so many people hollin like they need titles...Im king//
Is what the screamin with no justified meaning ta what they name brings//
yall pullin the same strings relivin tha same scene...//
Is it tha same thing like when Martin luther had a dream//
or when Rodney king took a stance cuz tha cops took a swing..//
What i mean is.....ta be king is not tha meanest killah in ur spot//
but ta be the next Educated scholar ta broke ur own stocks..//
feed your own blocks..by puttin capital in ur inner city//
gettin righteous about ur people by takin tha sinners with me//
like jesus..theres love behind tha pain an sorrow//

an you cant be blind by tha shine cuz there could be rain tommorow//
ur time is borrowed...so reach ta tha people//
instead of talkin bout desert eagles talk about oppertunity being equal//
how tha whole bush party's evil an all the budget cuts//
while a bunch of us is bunched in a bus going no where with these bunch of cuts//
that they laid on their album//
how can we allow em...ta call their self king..when their nuthin close ta malcom(x)..//
our outcome is depending on the state of hip hop//
How come we keep sending out violent messages and embracin shit talk//
that right there is played out..there is no amusement//
So prove ur a king an revolt an start a MOVEMENT!!

I quick keyd this so I hope it makes sense...REALLY!
Hit me up with some opinions...I will return ta sender!!! lol

uppin...I will return tha favor...

i was feelin this...thought it was pretty good....the flow was good and your vocab was aight.....
you cant be blind by tha shine cuz there could be rain tommorow//
how can we allow em...ta call their self king..when their nuthin close ta malcom(x)..//

^^^i liked these lines...keep it up 6.5/10

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Uppin^^^^just lookin 4 more opinions!!!!

cold steel???
crew name CODE STEEL....

see a connection???

nice flow, good emotion, decent vocab, u stood on topic...
not a bad drop....

7.5 outta 10....

some lines wasnt as good as other so it was a decent read....

this was a good drop & it got a great overall quality thru out the whole joint fo sho
make sure 2 return the favor fam