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Old 02-27-05, 12:25 PM   #1
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ExPlicT"XL"LyRiCiSisT

IP: 35B4 581E

XL B at That CandySHoP Drankin BranDy Till I DroP
Droppin These Suckah Foolz by Lettin My Gun PoP
Im Comin at Cha Fully Loaded Attackin Empting Clips Wit My Automatic
Ill be at Your Funeral on Ya Grave N front of Ya Mama Steadily Laughin
Im on tha Front Line Shootin Rapidly Tearing Up Peoples LegiMents
My SenTenceS ExpLict So LIsten as I Practice Killin Without Sentiments
Rippin It; Every time I get on tha MIc. and Rhyme;Droppin Bombs On tha Dime
I'll tell Ya One Time Explict Lyricisist "XL" Dont Play & I'll Commit tha Crime
IF I get Caught Ill Do Some Time & get Out Not Even Paying My Fines...SEEE
You already know tha Murderer is Coming back to tha Crime Scene
These Cops WOnt Find Me; but its Highly Likely Im gonna Find YOu
Like a Bounty Hunter and tha CrocMan Combined Ya Chance Iz Finally Through
You gots No Crew & if U Do Your Probably Nothing Without em So U

AyO>>>>>>>>Names Explict Lyricsist.."XL"......Im New to tha Site
Droppin a KEyStyle so Let me Know How It Stands Up.....Feedback Please
Practiicin till I get To where I need to Be while these hatahs hate on me..lol
Yo...Peoples...hit me back
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Old 02-27-05, 12:44 PM   #2
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this shit was mad stretched and thats bad....pretty good flow nuttin mind blowin...wordplay was lackin in ya drop hommie...vocab wasnt in good use as well...and there wasnt no chorus so dat cost ya a lil...cuz if ya gonna not put a chorus in ya betta hope ya verse is crazy...

overall: pretty wack

if ya need help on what im talkin bout check out da link in my sig..
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