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Old 02-22-05, 12:04 AM   #1
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Alright just got a little feed on me droppin some skitzophrenia to a beat, here's me being completely serious, please listen all the way through, hope someone feels me...1
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Old 02-22-05, 12:17 AM   #2
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omfg....ya vocals sound kinda distorted...=\

flow is good tho...this voice is betta..lol...

lyrics is hot...ROFL...."its john henry's fault i cant say ------"..LMAO...

man that was funny how u cut that out...

delivery is good and emotion fits the beat...i dont really like screamin on tracks no more so i like the emotion...all that blue tho ....lol...

overall tho...this was a good track...weird concept tho...talkin bout three piggies....lol..

but yea man..ya vocals sound distorted like u used the wrong noise reduction...
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Old 02-22-05, 05:02 AM   #3
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aight im listening

beat is dope...

1st verse
raise your vocals cant really hear, three little piggies shit is different
lyrics are nice, lol, shit is funny but nice.. seems on beat but your vocals sound wierd
........emotion is dope......i wont eat the sandwitch......lol
shit is dope so far

BLUE...who is blue...?
too much blue... but fits the song,,,


2nd verse... three little piggies.... i like the meotion in this verse..shit is dope yo
i like the way your different...
BLUE? the blue is everywhere....lol.........lyrics is dope in this one...some po;itical shit..
that would be dope if i was on this...lol shit seems dope thus far..


shit is dope..i liek that three little piggies thing...good metaphore yo

just wana know..?
was that you who was saying blue..in the background...

also your quality of your voice was kinda wierd...like it was not that good..lol

but dope track if i had this on a Cd i wouldnt listen to it in the car...but i would listen to it like while i was cleaning my room or somthing ya feel
its a great filler for a CD.....ya feel
dope shit
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Old 02-23-05, 09:25 PM   #4
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blue = big brother/gov't/rule enforcers ... 3 little pigs = metaphor for old money ...ups
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Old 02-24-05, 10:47 AM   #5
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vocals could be upped


good beat

flow is good

not a bad track


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Old 02-24-05, 11:55 AM   #6
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werd, I'm feelin' this beat...nyce sample, them strings are kiLLa duke...

ya flow's on point and I'm feelin' your vocab and content, flow's crazy nyce, but yeah, up ya vocalz s'more B ...keep it yoU [Pee...
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