im not about ta give it up, till i've had enought
i've asked god ta forgive me, for what i've done
i learned my lession believe me...... im not tryin to be number one
with my face on MTV..............were everybody can see me.

man there use to be time when everything was fine..
i never had a god dam thing except for my pride with a soul inside
but lately its like i lost it...........
i never ran my mouth unless somebody else caused it
mabey me bein tha only one who speakes from tha heart, an tellin tha truth
will make ya understand im willing ta do what ever it takes ta make a move
my energy is fireing up so bad i dont know what to do,
an inspiering talent is how i was goin ta ever get throught

what do i need to proceed, throught this
im hear to re-create a new breed of movements
i can barely breath around tha rudeness
arnt you sappose ta be on tha bottom of tha hip-hop newby list
you probably only sold 2 records back in autom called BOOBIE&NIP'S

YEP i've got a few screws too lose
thank god im still alive cuz i should have been tha front page news
i try hard ta survive my way throught this but came out with a scratch an a bruise.........
this girl i met, i got right attached
she showed me a new world that gave me a better meaning to my rap
sometimes i wish i never met her cuz she only looked good on her back
i structurize my rhymes ta elavate my lines one word at a time
dedacated every bit of effort that i could ta make this possible
been throught to much shit in my life........
watchin my younger brother an mother in an out of tha hospital
there's only so many stiches there lip's can take
how many rib's must he break to realize tha mistake he made
how many black eye's must he make on your face
how many lung's must he bust to make him feel great

it fuckin makes me sick, to even look at that backstabbin prick
if we ever meet agian im a fuck up his lip
bust his jaw, an listen to his lung split
that muthafuckas gonna get...........A WORD OF ADVICE.................
RUN? CB83

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yo this was good u kinda kept it simplistic but it caught your attention where u can't stop reading it was all good except for the chorus was kinda a lil off in creativity,

what do i need to proceed, throught this
im hear to re-create a new breed of movements
i can barely breath around tha rudeness
arnt you sappose ta be on tha bottom of tha hip-hop newby list
you probably only sold 2 records back in autom called BOOBIE&NIP'S

after the word rudeness it kinda fell off "hip-hop newby list, it rhymed but didnt go through too smoothly cuz u had 3 syllabales when all the rest had 2 syllabyles, it only fits in when u have a variety of syllabales and the BOOBIE&NIP's is supposed ta be funny???? no hate but it just doesn't make sense at all
anyways the rest of the hook and all your verses defitnly made up for that i'll give ya a 7.5/10 keep elevating