nigga i keep you hot like hadez
take one bite nigga i give you rapez
just please don't hate me
fucking with this bitch gonna give u aid's g
leave your ass ridin on flow like baby's
nigga yo bref kick like jet lil
commin to this block nigga you betta respect me.

if you don't give a damn ima load my glock what
if you don't give a damn i make ya drop what
if you give a damn use your heart as a prop what
im a nigga gonna get to the top what

im a make a nigga sink like quick sand
i bust yo face.. up with quick hands
i'll attach your shit.. to your heart glands
my lerics so raw i just might get band

this il nigga don't even know
he take som slim fast
and he still slim slow
shit i be smokin akapoco dro
nigga so fat make his heart beat slow
use his skull as a candle so his eyes can glow

it's like the attack of the clones
have nigga afraid..to be home alone
like homealone i give yo mom the bone
she always gettin mad y i don't answer my phone
she just a hoe.. must be like ice cube.. cuz her pussy cold
bitch gott titties as old as mold rottin to hold
got a bigger beard then zz top can fold
i shock the glob have your ass rottin then a corpse with holes
fuck lovers and friends ludcris stock is gold flows is old spots like pogg
the nigga off 101 dalmations..that was sold.. have your feet lifted like Dr. shouls

uppin hit my page up

This is ok.....could be more creative with your approach though...
I dont like the way you say in your title "luda beat"..when there is no beat to an open mic text page..lol..
Try have a more solid closure next time..this one is ok..
keep doing your thang nigkah!

THE D!

tanx man i appreciate it