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Old 03-01-05, 10:01 PM   #1
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Goin To War(dissin NOK)

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ITS TOO BAD YA COULD MADE SOMETHIN OUTA YA SELFS BUT YA'LL DONE FUCKED UP NOW!

no sensible conversation im bombin ya fuckin station
thats it thats what it'll be then suddenly JDOT wants admiration
so he start to pop off at the mouth 6ft is ya fuckin destenation
my bullets ill give ya the navagation hood dwag fuck a collabration
we through im comin for you too no sensibable communication
congratulation ya just walked in into a mess and i know ya addres
NOK NOK its death yall never see succes put up ya signal of distress
ya sinkin im thinkin no i know i can end ya with out blinkin
no second chance what ya wanna square dance ya in disbelif
how can this kid diss me sissy when i end ya shit it'll be relif
cause ya obviously have a death wish ya wanna swim with the fish
what ya gonna come back with a remix of a song done by marshell mathers
look bitch look as S.I.N gathers but id much rather fhinsh ya by my
self bastard i aint afrid of no man and this just began im down 4 it
i well make sure this beef gets morbid hood dwag ya gettin extorted
an this is just a portion of what i got for ya i dont care if i get
supported cincanatus ya lame ass track was thwarted i cant belive
i lowered my self to retaleat for gods sake just shut the fuck up
ya way to stuck up get ya head out ya ass ya walked right into my trap
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Old 03-01-05, 10:06 PM   #2
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Not that bad. A lot of lines weren't rhyming and didn't have a multi to end it, so watch that. I got an Eminem beat in my head, I don't know why, but I did. Overall work on your vocab and your rhyming. px
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Old 03-01-05, 10:43 PM   #3
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yo really read ur post man i did not once try beefin with ya if u want ta beef with JDOT then fine i was just tellin ya seriously hit me up when u read this
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Old 03-01-05, 10:46 PM   #4
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Not that bad. A lot of lines weren't rhyming and didn't have a multi to end it, so watch that. I got an Eminem beat in my head, I don't know why, but I did. Overall work on your vocab and your rhyming. px


i feel tha same...no hate wit u though...i aint in it...but y u gotta hate on NOK?...what did we do to u?...lmao
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Old 03-01-05, 10:49 PM   #5
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yo i would of felt it if i wasnt in it dont know how he could mistake bein told not ta beef with someone, with a beef from me..doesnt make sense
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Old 03-01-05, 11:19 PM   #6
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Old 03-01-05, 11:38 PM   #7
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Old 03-02-05, 01:12 AM   #8
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Old 03-02-05, 01:29 AM   #9
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Old 03-02-05, 03:17 PM   #10
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Old 03-02-05, 03:25 PM   #11
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oh....you kno JDOT clappin back right?


LOL...not good, i was willin to drop tha beef, cause hood stook up for u...ur guna be added in tha TE diss w/ me and a special appearance....lol
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Old 03-02-05, 03:47 PM   #12
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im ready for it pussy and CLAP BACK who the fuck is u JA RULE
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Old 03-02-05, 04:10 PM   #14
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Old 03-02-05, 07:13 PM   #15
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ha! no replies...bitch nigga you wack...fucka OM, set up a battle...
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