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05-15-05, 11:02 PM
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Skadoosh!
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"RV Goes On Safari" ...WTF!?!?!?
IP: 477B D81A
"RV Goes On Safari"
An Open Mic by Solo. Road Trip Came To A Bust..We Headed Back To RV… But Ya Think That We Through With This Shit, Hardly… We All Met Up At A Restaurant, Chowing Down On Calamari… Thinking What To Do Next, “SHIT! Let’s All Go On Safari”… Location: Some fuckin hot ass place where the sun burns real hard… CALI gets sunburnt now he runnin round actin like a hyperactive retard… No more herb bitch-slaps..the truck bumps over him as we head out… One Man Band drivin the shit but relaxed, laid back with the dreads out… Some of us rememberin back to the circus we raided just last week… Kon jumps up screamin..he got a scorpion stinger stuck in his ass cheek… Stop by the lake ‘n’ get out, NewKid drops a shit bomb on a sleeping rhino… Gets a horn up the crack have him lookin pale like a scary ass albino… Marv thinks he Steve Irwin hunting crocs, but they be hunting him instead… Before they get him a hippo bursts out and swallows his whole fuckin head… L.I. up on a rock thinking he the lion king, got his loud mouth roaring… He gets smacked by an elephant trunk, we watch L.I. fly by soaring… The lions be roarin at Drakel, but he smacks them all with an iron ring… Beat them one by one he’s like “Fuck You I Am The Original Lion King!!”… We kickin it real, get the weed out when we see some hyenas passin… Get a little puff, puff give wit them ma’fuckaz and they be crackin up laughin… Then them hyenas shred up GKillaz makin a large downpour of blood red… Solo and Spek there laughin wit tha weed like “this shit fucks wit ya head”… We Back In The Truck..But Yo The Stop At The Lake Was Dope… Now We Rollin Out Draggin Kool Col In His Wheelchair By A Rope… Chased By Lions Until Drakel Steps Up..They Ain’t Lookin For A Rumble… Now We Out The Plains And Fuckin Drivin Straight Into The Jungle… Doe Bagz and Morse Code poppin off more drugs looking like fuckin junkies… When chimps descend on us and they both like “Holy shit its rainin monkeys”… Then Red Bull is like “Chill cuz, they just monkeys, what’s with all the drama”… Then he pulls sumthin outta his pocket and he’s like “here, have a banana”… Troops thinking he gone get some play..he be chillin cool as Ice like Vanilla… His wish finally comes true..he gets dragged off and ass-raped by a gorilla… The monkeys are gone but one stays with Red Bull, sittin down in his place… J Dot disses Red Bull then the monkey jumps up and cops a shit on Dot’s face… O.M.B drives into a fuckin tree and suddenly the trucks just a total wreck… We get out on foot and then E.C runs by with a big ass snake around his neck… We don’t give a fuck, its funny..a spider drops on E.C’s face and his shit flows… Laugh when it bites him and he looks like a fuckin baboon with a swollen nose… Then we jumped by some African tribe acting crazy..got some of us running fast… SPuL tries to flee the scene but he ends up crying with a dart in his fuckin ass… Turns out they headshrinkers..wanna shrink a big head holla at MarvJay… But his head already been swallowed so they searchin for some new prey… CALI somehow got out here crippled, they jump him not giving him a chance… Solo, Lay-Text and Red Bull lend a hand and join in with the victory war dance… So That’s It For Us, The Safari Is Over For Us Crazy RV Party Drinkers… Now We Gone Chill In The Jungle With Our New Pals, The Headshrinkers… LINK: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190218
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05-16-05, 12:00 AM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Ha this was hot .. i was really feeling it ,
You were mad creative , you had nice imagery Very Humerious Drop..had me rolling...it was very funny your vocab and wordplay was on point , your structure was good too, flow was good , sorta feel off alittle then it regained again ... This was a very good drop.. I was really feling it! ...nice shyt and i better be in the NEXT ONE!
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05-16-05, 12:38 AM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
YAY! another one, got pumped when i saw the title, lmlo
wow, best one yet i think, hahaha, so funny...the hyena part was good, spul gettin shot in the ass....fuck it, i liked the whole thing, enjoyed it all....made me laugh, FUCKA! keep this up, gotta go to china next, or the himmalayins.....OR go back in time to medival age or something, man, that'd be dope worrrrrrrrrd to solo, keep up, best one yet
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05-16-05, 01:09 AM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
Haha. You are one weird person.
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05-16-05, 07:34 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: C1E7 0953
You're the king of open mics for real. Always dropping mad funny stuff like this. You so creative, I mean: a safari? Who would think of this stuff rofl...
Shit be cracking me up like crazy, overall flow was good. Vocab was nice, funny too. Only negative thing is I'm not in it  Keep on dropping this stuff man, I look forward to reading ya open mics!
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05-17-05, 02:09 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
feedback now or get hoe-slapped bitchez!!!!!
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05-17-05, 05:54 PM
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Metropolis
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IP: B52C 6258
RTF!!!
this was a lil strange lol, idk where u got the idea for this, but it was pretty good u went o'l school wit it tellin a story n shit. i couldn't really relate to it tho since i dont know most of th apeople in there, so i guess i dont appreciate it as much, nah mean. but overall pretty nice drop here, i could really see whats goin on. i give it an 8.5/10 keep doin ya thing and RETURN THE FAVOR please..... |
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05-20-05, 03:37 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
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werd!!!! she never has a bad word to say about me....... do ya my darlin
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05-20-05, 03:38 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 764C 1B96
^U kno I wuv ya dope style
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05-20-05, 08:08 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: D5AB 74BE
nice drop solo, some shit was funny as hell
honestly i thought you were gonna get a lil more creative but meh, its an om..lol but on that spul line im surprised you didnt say . we jumped by some African tribe acting crazy.. n not to mention- when spul tried to flee the scene, he fell behind.... n blended in ^^no beef spul...i was just expecting to read that..lol
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speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-20-05, 08:13 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 828D 0B7A
hahhahaha, saw the title and started laughin before i read it... then when i dead i was rollin laughin!! shit was funny as hell, (although this time you didnt mention me....bitch)j/p
but seriousely this was creative and dope.... you should do an RV themepark om!!
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05-20-05, 10:40 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 28AD 5545
LoL Man Damn SOLO Shyt Was Funny Mayne!hot Shyt Man!Shyt Had me Laughin N Shyt!True Talent Man!True Talent!nice Rhyme Scheme,Vocab,n Da Flow was Awesome!I Was Really Feelin it Fam!Overall
8.5/10 Keep That Sik Shyt Up Man! 
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