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Old 03-01-05, 09:29 PM   #1
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Clubbing (Part One)

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Go, Go, Go, Go, Go, Go

Verse-1
Yo, Yo, Yo Cincy Back With A New Twist Of Music
Girl Shake That Ass And Show Me How You Do This
Turn On Some Club Joints And Watch Her Move It
This Girl Aint Stupid, She Know's Just How To Do It
I'm Up In Club With My Cup Up In The Air, Get Drunk
It's Time To Bring On Atlanta, To Cali, Let's Get Crunk
The Nigkas In The Back With Spots, And Pop Bottles
Dropping Nigkas Jaws Like They Seeing Hot Moddels
Un Touchable We Smoking On That Weed Ya See
We Be In 7969, In The Little City Of Long Beach
Let's Go Let's Do This Every Body Put Your Hands Up
Going To Break It Down In The Club Till The Sands Up

Hook
We Be Clubbing Like Marquest Houston And Joe
About To Let This Ish Go, Popping Bottles Of Hipno
Girls Stanking Smell The Pussies Wet, Let's Go
Take A Chick From The Club, She Want To Get Go

Verse-2
Fine, Let The Time Fly, We Getting High Like A Jet
Drinking Hipno, Ass Bouncing, And Girl Pussies Wet
It's Hot Nigka You Know How We Do Up In The Club
With One Hand Up, And The Other Hand Puffing Bud
Uhhh, Beat Banging, And I'm Feeling A Little Tipsy
I See Smerks In This Bitch, And Smell Som'n Fishy
Living It Up, Man It's So Hot, You'd Think It's A Dream
Yo I Tear This Bitch Up, And Let These Bitches Scream

Hook
We Be Clubbing Like Marquest Houston And Joe
About To Let This Ish Go, Popping Bottles Of Hipno
Girls Stanking Smell The Pussies Wet, Let's Go
Take A Chick From The Club, She Want To Get Go

Look Out For The Remix, Oh No.....


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Old 03-01-05, 09:37 PM   #2
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yo i gotta admit this was a lil better than your gay diss track that sucked more balls but are u sure u didn't bite some shit off 50 "go,go,go,go,go"
"girl shake that ass and show me how to do this" if u a guy that doesn't sound straight
work on some more original shit too while your at it
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Old 03-01-05, 10:09 PM   #3
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Not too bad man. Like HD said though seems like you kind of took the concept of a 50 Cent track, be sure to say you are doing that. I liked it overall, keep it up man.
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Old 03-01-05, 10:10 PM   #4
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"girl shake that ass and show me how to do this" if u a guy that doesn't sound straight


Why doesn't that sound straight? I like watching girls bounce their ass, don't you?
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Old 03-01-05, 10:16 PM   #5
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hell yeah but don't think i wanna learn how ta do it myself thats where i was comin from...and since he came out with a diss track to me that wasnt any good i just feel like putting out some smart ass shit
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Old 03-01-05, 10:28 PM   #6
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it was iight...nothin really stood out to me...it was iight
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Old 03-01-05, 11:56 PM   #7
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i love your stucture you jsut like me with stucture and flow the imagery is nice and your creativty is good i would like to do a collab wit you man, and we crew so we should ill put a post in the crew thread holla at it but this is dope yo, peace
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Old 03-02-05, 12:54 AM   #8
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Oh Weerd, Oh Please Man, Yo Parallel Man I Got You We Can Collab Remix, Or What You Want To Collab Hand Me The Topic
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Old 03-02-05, 08:53 PM   #9
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Upping This Man........
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Old 03-03-05, 02:07 PM   #10
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Upping Ths..............................
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Old 03-03-05, 02:36 PM   #11
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gay gay gay werst song ever made me want to throw up my hipno lmfao wack song u must like stinky pussie cause u talked bout it that whole track
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