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metaman has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 12:17 AM.

this dude wants us to believe he puts cold meat in a hole,
you dead dog cuz martin done said it you "reap" what you sow,
imma bury you dog you can only elevate your game up,
if jayceon get killed to excavate his whole grave up,*
you need to get management to help you unfurl your knacks,
even if dude's name was paul ya'll still couldnt "bear" the facts,**
that you wack and lack the knack to command a battle rap,
if you whacked a pack of feds you couldnt catch a bad "wrap",
and thats a matter of fact done sent you back to the cemetary,
study this to learn vocab cuz this lesson you got is elementary

*Game's name is Jayceon Taylor
**This is a reference to the Grim Reaper's manager back in the WWF days, "Paul Bearer"

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GrimReapa has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 08:49 PM.

Look at dis nigga Metaman actin like eminem
but hes just jawanna man
battlin me just makes this a clean sweep
so just click on a porn sight and bet ya meat
Cuz im a lyrical Ali
That spits like a butterflie And Throws puches like a bee
Im king of metafor ring
Cuz i spit and all you spit is shit
you might as well just stop while you ahead of it
just ahead of da game
cuz after dis battle youll be on da wall of shame

Voted For: metaman

V/metaman...he gets my vote he came wit better punchs an good structure he had some personals an wordplay.....grim ur verse lacked consistent punchs an ur personals werent their also work on ur structure.....nohate good battle RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=m
closer=m
structure=m
personals=m
punchs=m
overall=Metaman

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Voted For: metaman

man this was a weak ass fucking battle
both of you need to eleavcte a whole lot

Metaman you need to elevate in your punches and in your personals, and the attempt to play off his name was wack,
so go fucking help youself and go to the tutorial section and do that
REAPA, you was wack as hell go fix your strucuture and battle him again

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Voted For: metaman

Nice stuff, metaman, pretty decent for a noob, like how you played personels off his name, good stuff, not hard hitting punches but they conected, other dude, we dont need you Grim Reapa, your wack, so just leave, you cant just rhyme words together, and think it's good, look beyond that, try finding links on your oponents yo... or make metaphors... nah mean, but as of now, you had no punches, so metaman takes this do to punches

v//metaman

Voted For: metaman

meta - Good drop man. You had a perfect structure there that flowed nicely. Your punches owned grim, and you had a good amount of personals that just made him look like shit. Tight drop man...8/10

grim - Aight man...structure was way off man...made your verse hard to read. Your flow was eh...could have been better thatn what it was. You had some good punches in there but they didn't land nearly as hard as meta f. I don't think you came as hard as meta in any way in this battle. Elevate in making a better structure for your verses man. Allright drop....5/10


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