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03-07-05, 12:41 AM
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Yea.. Im Still Dope ! !
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If You Feel Like I Feel ..!!!!
IP: 0825 899A
This is an old piece i wrote on Flow Intell.. But i think it deserves more attention.. cuz im dope
 check it...... We pack in a tight place it makes us harder to breath And waste our money on nonsense but got daughters to feed We pray to things we cant see operating on blind faith Goverment put crack in the hood to increase the crime rate Its a cruel world and you can see no love in they eyes They say thou shalt not kill but send our soldiers to die And if you feel like I feel throw ya fist in the air Violent dreams, silent screams remeniss on despair Its been a long dry season now its starting to rain They say its the angels crying like when Martin was slain The revolution right now, which side will u choose? Democrats and Republicans want u to follow the rules They want u to enroll in schools but the knowledge aint free A glock can get you paid quicker than a colledge degree Live by the sword so u gonna die by the sword With ya momma on her knees as she cry to the lord And if you feel like I feel throw ya fist in the air Violent dreams, silent screams reminiss on despair Its been a long dry season now its starting to rain They say its the angels crying like when Martin was slain The ghetto got blood like Minute maid cause we die for the wealth Moments like this I cant weep out loud so I cry to my self You need to check the score board you see the devils winning If Jesus really died for me and u why the hell are we sinning? Its hard to understand cause ignorance is bliss When the angels blow the horn hope ya name on the list But you cant speak your mind cause the truth they forbid They dont care bout me and you they wanna get to our kids And if you feel like I feel throw ya fist in the air Violent dreams, silent screams reminiss on despair Its been a long dry season now its starting to rain They say its the angels crying like when Martin was slain The rap game is the new slave trade hear what I say You have field and house niggaz and it shows in the pay The house niggaz sell records to the master they cool And they crack the money whip so the faster they move The rec execs keep u calm cause they lie through they teeth Thats why we fight to get a bite and why we die for the beef And if you feel like I feel throw ya fist in the air Violent dreams, silent screams reminiss on despair Its been a long dry season now its starting to rain They say the angels are crying like when Martin was slain ..Werd
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03-07-05, 12:42 AM
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Yea.. Im Still Dope ! !
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03-07-05, 01:23 AM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
i like this, i was feeling it man, perfect flow (if there is such a thing), structure was on....last two verse, i dunno, wasnt feeling as much as the first two, thrid one, actually, was good, but your cross-over to the last verse, didnt think there was that good of flow, if you know what i mean.....like, you had good passion/emotion in the 3rd, but it kinda died off and the last verse was a little mediocre compared to the other ones.......but a solid overall drop, really goood actually....keep up man
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