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Win by forfeit

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Fatal Lyrikz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-09-05 01:07 AM.

Opener
This Kid Contradicted Himself When He Said Click Here If Your Whacked
With Doing That Right There, This Kid Made It Clear As Another Fact

Middle
He's Looking Blue, With His Tenth Loss, Or Is It Just S Dot Purple Label?
You Merking Me? Schema Is A Dreamer I Don't Think He's Capable
A KO Is Fatal This Kid Couldn't Smell Defeat With Both His Shoes Off*
Cutting Ya Arms, Leaving Em' Raw, You'll Be Retiring Like Eric Bishoff
Ya Ish Is Played Out Son, For You It's Always The Same Old Scheme
Rhymes Disapear When Spoke Like Pimples Being Hit By Vanishing Cream

Closer
Listen, We Can't Hear Ish You Trying To Get Through Like Kids With No Ears
Silent Treatment With Votes, Now What A Good Way To End An RV Career


* Explain It Dafeat=Defeat

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schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 01:59 PM.

Cincanatus? what's that? Latin for weak rhymer?
7 battles like 7 laps...too early to re-tire...
go ahead IM your voters...and hope they prefer you...
but get ready for "yo i cant vote dude he merked you..."
same five guys in every battle...damn thats subtle dude...
real vets dont need a clone machine to get a double-you...
panties twist up when I asked you to join a noob crew...
but I wasnt mad you hatin me...most player hatin dudes do...
dreams of sonnin me...ho come back to reality...
watch this fatal lyrik catch a lyrical fatality...

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Voted For: schema

checkin da pollz.......interesting battle....werd if ya retiring Fatal you goin out in style...

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^^oops my bad...get that removed...

Voted For: Cincanatus

aight this battle was.... well... ok... kinda one sided.... but here is the break down...

Schema- first off weak opener... "latin for weak rhymer"? wtf.... not feelin it at all... sorry... aight but structure was ok but stretched in one bar near the end.... flow was good and didnt seem to fall off..punches and personals were bad tho...they just didnt hit hardly at all... vocab was ok but could have been better.... use better punches and personals and this could have been good..... overall a below par verse cause ive seen much better from you... 4/10

Fatal- aight yours was ok... structure leaves something to the immagination tho so work on that... i dont like the way it was set up like open middle closer... people can tell that with out you telling them.... flow was good tho... punches hit hard through out the verse as a whole and personals did well to... here is my favorite line:

Ya Ish Is Played Out Son, For You It's Always The Same Old Scheme
Rhymes Disapear When Spoke Like Pimples Being Hit By Vanishing Cream

^^^that was a NICE personal... love the wordplay off of his name... vocab was pretty good in ya verse... would have liked to see multis (from both of you) .... overall 7.5/10

ok Fatal got this in my opinion... no hate to schema but i have seen you come a lot harder than you did in this.... no hate to either of yall..... good battle but Fatal Lyrikz got this one hands down with an overall better battle verse... just came harder with the punches and personals especialy... good battle yall...

VOTE- Fatal Lyrikz............................................

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

uppin.............................................

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