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Old 07-29-02, 08:41 PM   #1
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Why God??Why(first piece)

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very simple...

why god? on the streets all my niggas are starving
why are we the victims?prez..can you answer that?
mom? Pops? god is the only stating facts..
"they" are runnig around doin disgraceful tasteless actions...like there giving satan dap/
why cant T sleep?-and why does it feel like im always sensing heat?..is it the sun? or the wrath of the gun?....or is it because theres so many choices and ive been lead to only one?...
i guess your so real..how you capture every moment
why cant i see you..when my eyes are so open..
the prohets slack so much..u make the strives open
its so simple..but yet so deep..i ask u again lord...why am i feeling this heat??..why god??


well......this is my first piece ever..tell me what you think...1
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Old 07-29-02, 08:51 PM   #2
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yea doggy i feel u it is a struggle. i ask myself that to where God at but no answer dats why u juss gotta live ur life. shyt was real. keep postin. uno
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Old 07-29-02, 08:56 PM   #3
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yea thanks dawg...shit is for real...one
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Old 07-30-02, 12:19 AM   #4
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yo i'm feeling ur frustration. this was a good piece. i liked that line about how they "giving satan dap" it's a hot piece and a good 1st time. so keep it comin and keep reply'n 2. i hope they don't sleep on this piece > i HATE sleepers!
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Old 07-30-02, 03:17 AM   #5
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thank you...this positive feedbck is motivating me...to do more...
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Old 07-30-02, 05:04 AM   #6
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Thumbs up Re: Why God??Why(first piece)

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very simple...



god only made us
the rest is up to& a result of us

hmmHELL IS HOT
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Old 07-30-02, 07:12 PM   #7
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Smile ~ÇúRsË~of da~Ãlmighty Ï££mên~

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NICE!! I LIKE!!


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Old 08-02-02, 07:36 AM   #8
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damn boo,
dis was some heavy ish u was
sayin up in ere ... props!

Keep spittin da relaness ...

Stay active

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