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03-06-05, 04:21 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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Drama Queen vs Parallel
IP: 5043 32F4
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03-06-05, 04:23 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 04:23 PM.
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03-08-05, 04:28 PM
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Drama Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 04:28 PM.
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03-09-05, 08:11 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
Mortal Experience About Four years ago Grandma started to break Down Lots of hours in the hospitals, and yet she’s still Around Everyone thought she would stay up, with any Disease She fell down the stairs lots, with a sore in he Knee’s I was great full to have such a forgiving Grandparent I was to young really, that’s why I was very Transparent The whole family would always love to go to see Her But always there were to many problems to greet Her My mom would always tell me something was Wrong I almost thought she was immortal she lasted so Long Every word said was to her, which made me feel Curious Why & how it began happening seemed Mysterious We thought it was a tumour, but was to hard to Defer I tried going on, hoping there’s no more injuries to Occur Grandma was always so helpful and just so Forgiving I never thought she would die, why is she not Living? The day I went to see her in the hospital was very Great A few days later she past away, & I felt such tragic Fate The day the family all met up to go see her at her Funeral Everyone felt so depressed, which made me feel Careful Everyone Grandma had known, were there to see Her She was so peaceful by herself, ready for her Transfer I felt graced myself, I was just glad there’s no more Pain No more suffering, made me feel less and less Ashamed |
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