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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 03-13-05 at 06:18 PM

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Whyte-Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 05:54 PM.

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 05:59 PM.

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Kamikazee

[B][CENTER]Tha Truth

Challenging was a half-baked idea, but you're about to get done
'Cuz the closest you'll be to 9 is your losses before this one
Like I'm tryin' to conserve energy, I'ma put ya lights out
You're dope...wait, that's not right, someone pass the whyte-out
Been here for 1 month, 1,000 posts, nobody respects you
Complained about the lack of voting, but there'll be plenty against you
Key'd in like 6 minutes and I still clowned you spittin'
Now go cry me a river...so I can drown you in it

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Ur structure is wack as hell u rhymed wit two words twice One and You........can u not think of nothin......i posted mine in bout da same amount of time and i didnt rhyme wit any words twice.........u r wack.....Pz UPPIN

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Kamikazee

[B][CENTER]Tha Truth

Lol yeah I'm wack
"You're 9th Degree 'cuz that's as hot as you'll ever be"
Check the battle stats dickface, do you know how played lines like that are?

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Voted For: 9th Degree

9th.....
Challenging was a half-baked idea, but you're about to get done
'Cuz the closest you'll be to 9 is your losses before this one
damn..nice opener here...hit well....8/10

Like I'm tryin' to conserve energy, I'ma put ya lights out
You're dope...wait, that's not right, someone pass the whyte-out
nice play off name here....6/10

Been here for 1 month, 1,000 posts, nobody respects you
Complained about the lack of voting, but there'll be plenty against you
nice hit well.....6/10

Key'd in like 6 minutes and I still clowned you spittin'
Now go cry me a river...so I can drown you in it
decent....5/10

overall......25/40

Wyte out.....
I spit straight fire, and ill leave ur body wit "9th Degree" burns,
U step out of line wit me homie, i will teach ur ass so u can learn
ehh i felt you could have dropped a better opener...4/10

Ur failing to win in dis battle like teachin sign language in braille,*
Leave u like Earnheardt, "Died A Lap Early" and callin u D.A.L.E.
decent.....5/10

Ill connect wit a couple low blows, then hit u up wit a upper cut,
Leave ur ass laid out flat on ur back, now i can say i own u slut
hit well...simple..but to the point...6/10

Homie your flow doesn't effect me like u was a cool summer breeze
Da reason you 9th degree is cuz 9 degrees is as hot as u'll ever be
best bar in your verse here...nice...8/10

overall.....23/40

i just felt that 9th had a better overall verse with morse consistent punches...i also felt his were more complex and hit a bit harder....this is absolutely no hate to Wyte...your verse was pretty good...i just felt that 9ths was better....dope battle though...i enjoyed reading....Both of you guys...PLEASE return the favor with a vote in my battle against Tony Green...PLEASE!!!

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Thanks for da vote homie honest votes r returned and i already returned it jus now......Pz UPPIN DIS SHIT

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Kamikazee

[B][CENTER]Tha Truth

Voted For: 9th Degree

haha, this was good, heres what i see

whyte-out....not bad, thought some of your punches/personls were played and weak...you had a few good ones, but overall, 9th had more. i have to say, reading your verse was very had, i suggest not using white font, or make it bigger....but other than that, strucutre was okay, flow was a little off in places though, tune that up a little.....vocab can be upped, and i thought some lines were worded a little crappy, so wordplay should be upped too.....like your last line, it flowed poorly, and took away effectiveness from your punch, plus its played anyways....so, overall, not a bad verse, but i dont think you came that hard with it

9th....aight, structure a little sloppy in this one, same with flow....but you had the harder disses, personals were great, funny as hell....."your dope" line, that was good.....you had good vocab and wordplay, which is good to have to make verse alot better to read, opener was okay, coulda been worded better the first line.....but overall, you came harder, had better punches/personals, not much creativity, but you kept consistent in dissin him, and it was a well written verse

v/9th degree

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Uppin'.

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Voted For: 9th Degree

win here even though every single line was played... the fact they were played doesn't take away that they were punches with wordplay... unlike this other cats
Challenging was a half-baked idea, but you're about to get done
'Cuz the closest you'll be to 9 is your losses before this one
^^played concept but best bar of battle

whyte-

I spit straight fire, and ill leave ur body wit "9th Degree" burns,
U step out of line wit me homie, i will teach ur ass so u can learn
^^i've seen people say that same line agianst this cat before. and second one itn't a punch
Ur failing to win in dis battle like teachin sign language in braille,*
Leave u like Earnheardt, "Died A Lap Early" and callin u D.A.L.E.
^^first line is dumb cuz they still read with braille so thats just a confusing and dumb metaphor, second line is attempt at wordplay or sumin but its dumb, but stilla punch so not too bad
Ill connect wit a couple low blows, then hit u up wit a upper cut,
Leave ur ass laid out flat on ur back, now i can say i own u slut
^^^called 'em a slut... wow good job waste a bar callin someone a slut... anyone can do that.
Homie your flow doesn't effect me like u was a cool summer breeze
Da reason you 9th degree is cuz 9 degrees is as hot as u'll ever be
^^agian seen this agiasnt 'em before but prolly your best bar in ya verse

you still lose because none of ya shit really hit hard and most of your wordplay was dumb shit. and the lines that were good were played.

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return the hell outta my favor
links in sig

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Yeah, my verse was blah 'cuz it was keyed beyond belief. Will return vote soon, uppin'.

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