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03-15-05, 10:25 PM | #1 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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Textual Intercourse Telepathy
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Textual Intercourse Telepathy
Far more than Sex-To-Me… Verbally breaking down physical Complexities-Algebraically... Till we simultaneously sexually reach a state of full climax successfully... Poetry in Motion to the fullest kinetically… It’s real : Ma, just try to understand that mentally on a higher basis we can communicate and connect…Before sex you must first arouse my intellect, theoretically we’re to engage in Mind Sex before physical sex… either way… its guaranteed I shall satisfy your every emotion… Now… Lay back… Focus…Open your mind… and relax… Me and Rell are gunna take full control… V1: :Ice Pick I Put your Faith-In-Me Emotionally, Mentally and Physically Facing-Me Gracefully I shall take you to fulfillment as long as you stay-with-me ~ faithfully… Safe-n-free ~ Within my arms is the place-to-be ~ safe-fully Is it now safe-to-see ~ How deep you love runs for me ~ within your heart is there a place-for-me? Giving you my all mind, body-n-soul until you decipher the base-of-me Kissing, holding, squeezing and Tasting-me…Submerge unto me, Play-with-me I Each n Every Eternal Everlasting Emmense Emotion Entirely Exposed n Expressed NonBlatantly Got me anxiously ~ waitin in anticipation Patiently I {Are you feeling me? Relax, cause I’m not going to attempt to take you to far} I Bodies collide as we lie side by side and communicate feeling intensive mental Vibes-And-Connections Beautiful Eyes-And-Complexion, I just long to hold you close cause I know within your arms Lie-Direction Just let me stimulate your Mind-To-Perfection as your Thighs-I’m-Caressing I { This love we share defies- Perfection…Realize- affection breaking away from the art of obsession} I No lies- pure confessing Your sexual potency provoking-me Illusive confrontations, this situation got me waitin for what you showing-me Pure devotion for me The in explainable explained thru poetry ~ time proceeds to elapse as we manifest emotionally My heart exposed openly ~ Love is forever deep knowingly Nasty Rell: Take it lower-B :Ice Pick I Physicality my Mentality erect ~ Deeper levels of sex we perfect and we connect only if you let my intellect affect your emotions correct ~ I shall never defect as you proceed to get wet as feelings accumulate-and-collect We communicate-and-connect ~ Better yet let me express my emotions direct thru text ~ I … Fluidly… ~ Only if in my mind you choose-to-be Physical and Mental satisfaction is new-to-see Truthfully ~ love forever true-indeed Baby girl you-and-me Chorus://Nasty Rell aka the Overseer: I Girl you-and-me, we approach the boundary prudently And strip each other down to psychological nudity It's new-to-me, not knowing what love is construed-to-be But it'd be rude to leave… before I choose-a-seed... Lady Love Consuming-me, invade physical space till there is no room-to-breathe Speechless- emotionally complete-ness is so soon-to-be Soon-to-see, finding out what love is construed-to-be But it’d be rude to leave… before I choose-a-seed… I My love I feel it in the back-of-my-mind Unravel thoughts trap-n-confined As I hold-ya-close Till the point were we proceed to overdose Thoughts elope ~ Words wrote ~ poetical quotes Finding out what its construed to be as me tongue kiss and embrace faces Elevating Levels to higher basis as I comfort you and ya painful past erases Places like Mind and soul is what my love is flowing-though… Take it slow-with-you… I just wanna feel what you going-through… Physical Desire is real… But sex could never reach the fullest extent without me knowing-you Showing-you… I Unthought of dimensions of sex engulfed and grasped and brought into comprehension Mind sex pure Intentions mental positions Sexual tension vibes got me interested- vice versa agreeable ~ Nasty Rell: Break it down for her to a clearer-view Ice Pick: Afterwards ever shall I leave you abandoned you… Remain close and here-with-you Just put your faith-in-me faithfully I know you scared cause the future is unforeseeable ~ Chorus:// Nasty Rell aka the Overseer: I Baby Girl you-and-me, we approach the boundary prudently And strip each other down to psychological nudity It’s new-to-me, not knowing what love is construed-to-be But it’d be rude to leave… before I choose a seed... Ice Pick; I Lady Love Consuming-me, invade physical space till there is no room-to-breathe Speechless- emotionally complete-ness is so soon-to-be Soon-to-see, finding out what love is construed-to-be But it’d be rude to leave… before I choose-a-seed… I Ice Pick: Say love…This love I feel is real… if only you could see that… I know you scared inside because the future is unclear… but just hold my hand and have faith in me… Forever I shall be by your side… and I shall take you to were passion lies… Mentally… Textual Intercourse Telepathy Mind Sex Craziest shit i've read in a minute...Featured for iunno,2 weeks~FLUID.
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I am Here To Save You All Last edited by fluidmoon : 03-28-05 at 08:45 PM. |
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03-16-05, 12:14 AM | #2 | |||||
I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 80D6 7866
It was dope. I wont go into detail about the dopeness though.
Heres what you can improve: You start new lines at the wrong time... thats basically whats fuckin up ya structure. Might just be ya style or somethin though. whats the link to ya audio?
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03-16-05, 04:01 AM | #3 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 67D5 4B8C
Dope shit.. Multies like whoa up in this one..
Structure aint really all that, but the vocab is real nice.. Imagry was pretty good too. I'm feelin it man. |
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03-19-05, 06:37 PM | #4 | |||||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 28AD 5545
This was fucking dope, crazy wordplay and vocabulary, great job...glad to see you post again.1
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