Originally Posted by hood_dawg

HOOD_DAWG:
bitch... when i say i'm uppin i mean i'm uppin
i don't even bother with the beef and duckin
i don't bother with fucking but theres sumthin
that 1 thing has me dumpin shells and pumpin
ya'll type feed or else u muthafuckas can bleed
but ya'll don't so get prepared ta meet ur death
i'm doin heroine, weed, Xtacacy, pills, and meth
so much that i don't know wut the fuck i'm doin
smokin, drinkin, and chewin, doin shit new N'
always some new fat bitch that i'm screwin'
always sniffin glue that i was gluin til i got blue skin
smokin till every masterpeice was ruined
so much gun shots got ya thinkin it's iraq
cuz as soon as u turn around u get shot in the back
get stuck in airplanes while they being hijacked
ran off track, smacked a tower and made ya think u was black



I don't even bother with eating
I don't even bother with sleeping
i don't even bother with daydreaming
i just fuckin bother with emceeing

LFS THE GREAT:
I get pissed off when niggas start disrespectin my skills,
I mean what the fuck, when I get in tha booth etchin and sketchin a kill,
But fuck writin words down I’ll rip shit off the domepiece,
But it’s not retractable it’s 100 percent complete,
Stompin ya face wit cleats resting cozy on my feet,
They fit perfect lemons is sour and apples is sweet,
Blippity bloo and Blobbity Bleep, Skiddity Beebo and Skallamazoo
Sorry I switched back to silly, what was I sayin bout you?
Oh yeah I was talking bout how I murdered ya pride,
And got 35 to life so now I’m stuck inside,
So fuck all you niggas you don’t respect me and don’t read tracks
You can’t say you do you don’t even leave feedback,
But I could give a fuck what you bitches care about,
Cuz like NOK is leavin the buildin, you’ll get knocked the FUCK out….
Hood said to write 16 lines on some angry shit, but I say fuck that,
I write as much as I want, now try to make a clap back,
But I don’t want you to get scared and start throwin hissy fits,
But if you can’t help it then go ahead you little sissy bitch….


I don't even bother with eating
I don't even bother with sleeping
i never even bother with daydreaming
i just fuckin bother with emceeing

Originally Posted by Chaos

Originally Posted by FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

i have to dissagree with chaos here...

hood dawg since the last piece of yours that i left feedback on you got alot better.. look at your lines they were actually dope lol.. good wordplay there too. Got ya structure and flow on point and them first 4 lines were just sick. Really feelin ya shit now. LFS your verse wasnt up to par as the rest of yours but definately a good read keep droppin shit ill keep leaving feedback. Dope piece

8.5/10