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Buck.Shot 1 16.67%
One M.B. 5 83.33%
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Old 03-15-05, 05:42 PM   #1
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Buck.Shot vs One M.B.

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Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

DROP LINKS AND VOTES WILL BE RETURNED HONESTLY BY ME OR BUCK.

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 03-15-05 at 06:42 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.
 
Old 03-15-05, 05:44 PM   #2
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Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 05:44 PM.
 
Old 03-15-05, 05:44 PM   #3
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O.M.B, You aint gonna have me dq'ed for having more than 5 battles open are ya?
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Old 03-15-05, 05:45 PM   #4
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you gotta promise nigga, cause i aint gon drop a verse if u just have me dq'ed straight away
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Old 03-15-05, 05:55 PM   #5
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One M.B. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 05:55 PM.
 
Old 03-15-05, 05:55 PM   #6
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yeah nah dont worry about that... just drop... you wont get DQed for that shits unfair.
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Old 03-15-05, 06:22 PM   #7
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Dudes pissed he been here the longest an stil no Recognition..
i dont even know why i'm battlin....
...............should just assign him a 1st floor crew Mission
Whats your RV Position? all fours, ass cheeks Wide...
only ever ''on top'' when ya lettin the dick Slip n Slide..
fixed on white Pride, everythin bout you is ''Pale''..
peepin MJ's court case is the only time ya see a 'Black-Mail'
i lay Facts-in-brail so even the blind ''see'' your Whack..
''Multiply'' your verse an it still wouldnt be a [w]rap!
I seen 5 dollar weed sacs with more of a Future...
no need ta Spray, after ya mom see's this, even she'll wanna shoot-ya!
i got punches that'll 'box u up' like bein stuffed in a SuitCase
kid even finished 'last' in the short bus egg n spoon Race...
i got this 'text' battle on lock, even if u tied up both Hands..
ya 'vocals' aint wanted like a choir bein at a 'One Man Band' stand..

Explanations:
fixed on white Pride, everythin bout you is ''Pale''..
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everythin from his font ta his sig are white, an he talks about shit like hatin on ebonics, as quoted in i think its 9ths sig
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''Multiply'' your verse an it still wouldnt be a [w]rap!
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dude claims he tight at multies, an a wrap as in......end of somthin, like the directors say, ya feel
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rest is simple ta work out

good luck O.M.B...dont really know much about you, but eh, honest votes will be returned if links are left by us both
...dont understand any of the verses? simply dont vote

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Old 03-15-05, 06:33 PM   #8
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leavin mics pipin hot, flowin till ya writin' stops
buck’s so "choked up" battlin, he might as well be fightin'-cocks.
Spittin-so-lovely, if i'm a cunt, then there's no way this dick-is-above-me
Ya pretty much said all but the words..... just admit-it-you-love-me
Ya names so gay… Buck shot? But you don’t even know gangs
Hey I aint complainin though, at least you realized you aint “DOPE,MAN”
So many posts, hes wack, he knows it, but boasts.. This nerds prey
IM GOING TO WIN... Its simple as fuck.…. just like his wordplay
Nobody feels what ya write, kid, ya only dreamin ya nice
Its sad… im a weedhead and ya rec got more L’s than I seen in my life
This fool claims that he KEYSTYLES all of his many writtens
Ya just makin excuses… that verse took you longer than 20 minutes
OMB’s a useless bitch.. wack as fuck, everything I spit is stupid shit…
^I figured I’d use that line to punch myself… its not like you’re doing it.
This faggot is done, I aint even tryinn no more, ima just diddle daddle fa fun
Think you beat vets..HA!.. cmon man, name the last non-herb battle you won

Didnt really care much about the structure this time... eh.. and if you dont get the punches or personals dont vote yo.
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Old 03-15-05, 06:38 PM   #9
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Damn
lol
aight u are sick with the multies, i'll give u that....

can we get some votes now y'all?
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Old 03-15-05, 06:49 PM   #10
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Voted For: Buck.Shot

this verse had alot more hard hitting punchlines it was definatly had good wordplay and good structue omb's verse was off at times and didn't stay consistant to win this but i won't vote since im in the same crew as him but i'd say he won on good vocab punches wordplay and creativity
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Old 03-15-05, 06:52 PM   #11
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LOL... man sinners angry at me cos I got a vote in our topical...

chill man.
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Old 03-15-05, 06:52 PM   #12
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fuck sorry man i voted by mistake i was men't to hit the feedback button...
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Old 03-15-05, 07:14 PM   #13
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OMB.......
leavin mics pipin hot, flowin till ya writin' stops
buck’s so "choked up" battlin, he might as well be fightin'-cocks.
decent wordplay here...ok opener...5/10

Spittin-so-lovely, if i'm a cunt, then there's no way this dick-is-above-me
Ya pretty much said all but the words..... just admit-it-you-love-me
nice set up line...5/10

Ya names so gay… Buck shot? But you don’t even know gangs
Hey I aint complainin though, at least you realized you aint “DOPE,MAN”
nice personal here...7/10

So many posts, hes wack, he knows it, but boasts.. This nerds prey
IM GOING TO WIN... Its simple as fuck.…. just like his wordplay
lol...nice..hit well..8/10

Nobody feels what ya write, kid, ya only dreamin ya nice
Its sad… im a weedhead and ya rec got more L’s than I seen in my life
dope...i was feelin this...8/10

This fool claims that he KEYSTYLES all of his many writtens
Ya just makin excuses… that verse took you longer than 20 minutes
ehh decent...4/10

OMB’s a useless bitch.. wack as fuck, everything I spit is stupid shit…
^I figured I’d use that line to punch myself… its not like you’re doing it.
dope..i liked this...7/10

This faggot is done, I aint even tryinn no more, ima just diddle daddle fa fun
Think you beat vets..HA!.. cmon man, name the last non-herb battle you won
nice closer here...6/10

overall......50/80

Buck Shot......
Dudes pissed he been here the longest an stil no Recognition..
i dont even know why i'm battlin....
...............should just assign him a 1st floor crew Mission
ok opener here....4/10

Whats your RV Position? all fours, ass cheeks Wide...
only ever ''on top'' when ya lettin the dick Slip n Slide..
decent...5/10

fixed on white Pride, everythin bout you is ''Pale''..
peepin MJ's court case is the only time ya see a 'Black-Mail'
decent....5/10

i lay Facts-in-brail so even the blind ''see'' your Whack..
''Multiply'' your verse an it still wouldnt be a [w]rap!
decent personal...5/10

I seen 5 dollar weed sacs with more of a Future...
no need ta Spray, after ya mom see's this, even she'll wanna shoot-ya!
ehh wasnt feelin this too much...sorry...3/10

i got punches that'll 'box u up' like bein stuffed in a SuitCase
kid even finished 'last' in the short bus egg n spoon Race...
lol humor...nice...8/10

i got this 'text' battle on lock, even if u tied up both Hands..
ya 'vocals' aint wanted like a choir bein at a 'One Man Band' stand..
ok play off name here....6/10

overall.....36/70

ok overall...i think both of you came with pretty good verses in this battle....props to both...OMB i thought had better personals...even though there werent that many in this battle...his punches to me were more creative and hit harder...neither one of you had real good structure....Buck...i thought you came with some decent wordplay...i thought that your verse was pretty good...but it just didnt cut it considering the person your battling...would have got the job done against most heads here...so basically im going with OMB because his punches and personals in my opinion hit a lot harder......PLEASE PLEASE...both of you guys return the favor with a vote in my battle against Flow Intelligent ....links in the sig......NO hate to either one of you...good battle
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Old 03-16-05, 08:36 AM   #14
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Thanks for that ^^^
uppppiiiinnn y'all!!!! vojppiobjiohj
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Old 03-16-05, 05:18 PM   #15
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OMB got this.. i was expecting more multi's but he still came much harder then dope buck, buck like i said u need to work on punches if ur ever gonna succesfully battle on this site.. u got the flow and structure down.. u just need to work on ur punches.. ONE M.B. get s this due to his flow structure punches and multi's it was pretty much and easy battle to vote on.. but Buck shot no hate just work on ya punches.. pz..
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