Yo! I finally found this, had it in an old notebook, I wrote this when I first started writing rhymes, so I thought I'd post this for fun (all but the first verse), check it...

Yo this is like the first rhyme I ever wrote, no joke,
so yo be honest if I flowed or choked,
and if you’ve seen some of my later posts,
then tell me if I’ve elevated or just stayed in this note… check it!

Check out these rhymes written like free styles,
Get used to it cause I’ll be here for a long while/
I’m nowhere near a mike controller status,
but yo that really doesn’t matter,
I’m still gonna try to bust rhyme that make walls shatter,
Having rookies lose control of their bladders,
While my flow keeps getting sicker theirs gets sadder and sadder/
I’d have these faggets shitting bricks, cause I just jumped in the lyrical mix/
Coming wit hand strikes and kicks, harder than a football blitz/
Don't make me have to slice necks and wrists, so don’t ever start talking shit/
And don’t get out of order, or be ready for the slaughter,
Of course I mean this metaphoric, as in a verbal slaughter, mothafucker…

Check out what's written, Using hard to comprehend words/
Mixing adjectives, nouns, and verbs,
to spit out an ill-sounding verse/
Having u whack rappers planning for the worst,
Barely holding on wit FAITH! like Fred Durst,
hey yo take cover, u bout to get hurt/
cause I just sparked the match and my flow about to burst/
and splatter out to the atmosphere,
making the spot hot like somebody was holding crack in here/
Content bitter like an onion; will have u dropping tears/
not much to look forward to, but much to fear,
If u in front of me and not by my rear/
and I don’t mean my ass, I mean behind me, u dumbass,
don’t try to get funny or u'll be hearing a gun blast,
simply for talking, not even for cash/

So what u think, that I don't hold heat, I live in streets,
and u ain't nothing to me but a pile of meat,
I could leave u dead on the streets,
wit a hole in ur head bigger than a 50 cent piece,
so for ur sake, just hope that I miss,
Its over, u already felling a cold breeze,
I don’t give a fuck, I do whatever I please,
Remorseless, so I won't feel a damm thing while I get ready to squeeze/
BANG!/ And this completes my verse of verbal slang/

I thought I was pretty basic, but yo tell me what u think compared to other of my rescent posts... peace