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03-26-05, 01:42 AM | #1 | |
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dfunk vs Copywrite 4000
IP: 2E43 6BFE
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03-26-05, 01:59 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
Copywrite 4000 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-26-05 01:59 AM.
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03-26-05, 02:01 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 541B 925B
dfunk has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-26-05 02:01 AM.
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03-26-05, 02:02 AM | #4 | |
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
dfunk..? ya wack son embrace these words in your head.. only time i caught him "spittin" correctly was in mike jacksons bed.. ejaculaten all ho ha's an laughs now prevails hemroid spots.. but im still waitin..you jerkin my chain..waitin for "cumin" thoughts.. heres a solution drop tha mic an man tha station.. cause raps evolution doesnt involve cross dressers lost in translation.. your punchlines are weak..you tryin to "roc-a-fella" wanna be bleek.. yea i know tha flows tight..but you tha gay type..to bring ky jelly to a friction fight. |
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03-26-05, 02:42 AM | #5 |
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IP: 541B 925B
This fag nigga tryin' to BATTLE ME // Dude you weak if I was a horse you couldn't even SADDLE ME /
I'm a mustang nigga you a nut-stain // Your crew dumb as fuck collectively yall got half brain / You went to London, England // Guy asked if he could "bum a fag*" / You backed your ass up and said PUT IT IN MAN! // Nigga you a fuckin cock-a-roach / You just hype-man nigga you need a lyrical coach // Dfunk does house calls homie i'm for hire / All you gotta do is make sure your bitch dressed in sexy attire // So after I school you / I school the little whore too // After I give her dick she'll be like "COPY WHO?" / I merk niggas while you jerk niggas // I pull triggas I was born to destroy your type of cigans* / * BUM A FAG = English way of asking for a cigarette. "Hey mate, can I bum a fag?" * CIGANS = Pronounced "CEE-GUNS". Plural for CIGAN, which in Croatian (European language) is used to describe someone of low stature.
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03-26-05, 02:48 AM | #6 |
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IP: 541B 925B
Good luck nigga, you got fire. Respect for ya man.
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03-26-05, 03:15 AM | #7 |
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Uppin this. Yall niggaz vote here. Show love. I need mad input.
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03-26-05, 05:06 AM | #8 | |
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IP: DAE3 AA77
Voted For: Copywrite 4000
umm you win plain and simple DECREE, your strucuture was ebtter which made it alot easier to read, also you had better punchlines, your metaphores where kinda played and that MJ line was kinda played, LOL actually really played, all tho you had personals your slefglorified, like you would say somthing about him them self glorify your self, but decent spit, i dont lkie how you centered your spit tho, it kinda makes your strucutre look bad all thoguh it isnt....DFUNK you need to elevate, youve been here long enough just take the time to vote and read more battles also youg ot to freestyle out loud that is how you get better on punches, also it seemed as if you forced your verse, but good shit
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03-26-05, 05:11 AM | #9 | |
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This was feedback posted for Copywrite 4000
IP: 9E2F CDE8
Checking the polls...
Decree took this easily........................ |
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03-26-05, 03:09 PM | #10 |
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IP: 541B 925B
Damn i thought i'd be gettin more love with this verse. I thought it was one of my better ones. Ah alright, whatever.
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03-26-05, 07:05 PM | #11 |
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03-27-05, 05:25 PM | #12 |
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03-27-05, 08:20 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Copywrite 4000
Ayyo decree i think u sarted the battle with ya alias doggs Decree Punches:Were good i liked them and they had comedy Structure:Very good Personals:Connected well Dfunk PUnches:Not good need a little elevation Structure:Horrible *scrolling down from his verse;scared* Personals:Nothing impressive |
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03-29-05, 03:37 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Copywrite 4000
decree~damn, one of the better battle verses i've read today, thank you..nice opener,it was effective,usually michael lines are played,but you brought your own style to this punch, well said, LOL@ "cross dressers lost in translation", funny punchlines as well, this verse was strong throughout,good,effective closing bar, LOL@"bring ky jelly to a friction fight", very creative battle verse, well said and done...1 dfunk~decent opener, you had some good lines,but i dont think you came as strong as your oponent,although i liked your closer, some people won't understand your words,like bum a fag, and cigans...but you had your own style with your verse too, i just think decree came stronger, well put together and more creative, good job both..1
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03-29-05, 06:43 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Copywrite 4000
...Decree took this one... dfunk - you had some aight punches, most of them were weak though, should've tried harder here in this battle if you knew you was gonna go up against some1 tough, your vocab was decent, work on that, structure needs help & your flow needs help too, but overall elelvate some more though Decree - boooooooooooo.........noticed this is not your best drop here, but you had some aight punches too...some of them were weak & some were okay, your structure was in palce, & not stretched like dfunk's...the vocab was aight here too, work on that hoe :\....the flow was okay here, except for 2 lines though that kinda fucked it up, but overall you took this one....
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