My attitude’s drastic which include acid like batteries
Got the type strategies to blast it like NCO academies
Make peace boil like grease and oil in hot motors
And slop Toyotas, these fun scripts has non-slip
Grips that rip comedy central like tales of the crypt
Persuasive lyrical are like abrasive materials will sandpaper
Microphones and wash dishes using wire pan scrapers
Stem grooves and improves comfort like loveseats
Thug beats on CD roll on dubs and hubs face club freaks
Fraud is strange and covers a broad range of gang tactics
My blend energetic and drastic like synthetic thermoplastic
Resist most acids with brisk posts classic ill like Jurassic
Park, grip powers while my scripts towers like skyscrapers
And fry vapors like frying pans no lying man, try taper
Verse, but need paper first for writing its so inviting
To jot down a hot noun or two my brains are igniting
Like gasoline would with fast keen flavor good in the neighborhood
My tall flow softer and also offer a variety of society behavior should
Do’s and should not do’s body is a rough finish eat thug spinach
Like Popeye and drop fly lyrics

i'd say this was good if it was a total free...because everything was so damn random and had no real focus what so ever....this isn't hate, just trying to leave constructive feed.......next time, concentrate your thoughts on just one topic and spit on that.....then maybe you'll start getting some respect in here......cause its not like you totally suck ass, just dont be so random, nah sayin?

and up your vocab too

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completed each thought for real dawg

lol ur a weird individual dawg, i enjoyed diz, real random & da lines was humouress as hell dawg

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Drakel thanks for the props for real dawg appreciate that

no probs, keep up man.......i know you completed thoughts, like every line.......but every new bar was pretty random, haha....it was still pretty cool though,

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Yeah Stuff Is Shit Here For Real Again Thanks For The Props

this is ur best dropp yet i actually enjoyed this one........u are kinda an odd ball but thats y i like reading ur stuff neva no wut ya gunna get....some times good/some times bad....in this case excellent u had good multis good vocab good structure....kinda random here and there.....but ill give u an 8/10 deff. deserved keep it up......RTF
peace