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Old 02-10-05, 08:18 PM   #1
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I Am My Brothers Keeper...

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The Invasion of Manhood....

His hands grope my privates the same hands he totes his bible
and with the same lips he quotes scripture he often whipsers stabbin my back with jarrin insults
of sin he plans to reveal what hes supposed to conceal
if i should reject his Purgin of My Soul that makes my spirit croak
with detestable feeling as his semen oozes from within me
in horror i want to wail from the torture
but the demons creep from there crevices with the force of a orgre
holding back my silent cries and tears to such a pitch that only God can hear..if only God was Here!! he would surely defend me in my times of need he would crush the leathery wings of this being that taunts me the archangel my prayers are riding on is being contended
hopefully he reaches the throne before my life is ended
i know defendin my manhood is my obligation but i feel so defensless
the crucifix on his neck is confirmation Jesus witness it ..
if only he would come of that cross and erase the disgrace
cast this false prophet in the lake of fire his rightful place
with his holy hands clense my sins that this man has force opon me,
and discard this demon of homosexuality that Satan is using to haunt me.. Brother do u belive me ?


A Kinsmans Redeemer...

My dear friend Yes, I belive u! indeed I do
I will proceed at once to avenge your blood,
of such u where not deserving your innocence preserving gone to waste,
for it was took before your desire came to lay with a dame and for this shame
i shall award this bastard! this disaster of a human specimen
i shall plunge my sword through his rectum and
he will realize his perverted ways is what led him to his grave.
my dear friend hope is not lost in Christ do belive
because he was there and his judgement will come through me..
hear me Please!! youll see it may never cease ya disgust,
but hopefully it eases ya lust to see such a cowards decease..
my heart sings out to your battered soul,
my friend and brother I love you and your secrets i will hold,
a tear falls and mingles with the blood not because of the murder that is planned but the Promise that was Broken.....


The Confession

Dear,Father forgive me for I haved Sin.
and how have u tresspassed against the Lord?
I have desired in my heart to murder a Servant of the most high GOd
Murder how ?with the slanderous tongue or literally with the Sword?
With the sword i planned to run it through his heart until blood spits forth
and screams as it leaves his filthy vains on the perverse sins
he has commited The Lord is my Witness on his vain words he will choke
cuz i will reach forth and crush his prayers in his throat.... father
and what sins has he commited?
He has offended the innocence of a child compiled with frustration of his oath to celibacy with acts of malicouness he disrepected his sacred soul
because of hatred of his own he used my friends as a toy for his self gratification excreting his semen on this childs salvation
his temptations provoked his desperations to the lowest extremity his admissibility was denied before he was born
so in his death life will be restored to the boy. My friend,..Father...
So you are God!! escuse me?ummhm so you have the power to judge
punish and forgive Sins?
well father in a way yes I guess..your a man and i confess my sins to you
and your not GOd but stand in the place thereof! Therefore I reckon
I am god for now? forgive me Father for blasphemy.Will Jesus forgive me?
Ask for me?
He will...so do you think it is Godly to repay Sin with sin?
Well father, i do not but i have swore to God in my anger and i dare not
go back on my word for a stranger that hides his face in the darkness
a heartless mass of human feces is he that abuses the will of a lad and takes life as the grimm reaper..In short i will not go the way of Cain I am My Brothers Keeper!
theres one thing I ask of thee..
yes father?
Who is he that has done such a terrible thing?
He is you father, you fuckin bastard!!
and he tore the veil as he pushed his sword through the Priest
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 02-11-05, 08:39 AM   #2
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Whoa lol
How come nobody commented on this peice?
Maybe cause its long
They should tho

In parts it was dope as fuck.....
Wordplay an the deepness was exceptional in alot of parts, Stayed on topic throughout, i enjoyed it

Keep these drops comin, if nobody else likes em, lol i do, it was straight as an arrow kid

You got skills

Peace
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Old 02-11-05, 08:13 PM   #3
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thanx man finally some respect yo
whenvea u want to collab hit me up with the topic and ill give u a hot
12-16 u heard
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 02-12-05, 12:08 PM   #4
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uppin...........
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 02-13-05, 03:44 PM   #5
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 02-13-05, 04:35 PM   #6
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get those links in, or indeph will close this..
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Old 02-14-05, 06:17 PM   #7
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i will
for aminute there i thoufgh tu where a mod!! lol
guess not
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 02-15-05, 04:53 PM   #8
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 02-26-05, 11:21 PM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 03-25-05, 03:35 PM   #10
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uppin..................
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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