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03-19-05, 03:03 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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Os1ris vs Crossword
IP: 6DE3 D322
Verbal Emotion's Round II
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03-19-05, 06:03 PM
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IP: C145 D8F3
Crossword has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-19-05 06:03 PM.
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03-19-05, 06:29 PM
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IP: F519 0F67
Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-19-05 06:29 PM.
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03-23-05, 07:52 PM
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#4
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[ a.k.a Os ]
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IP: F519 0F67
desperate measures reaching for an outlet, i digest my thoughts in constant regret i expect a lack of respect, constantly rejected and a man enclosed of failed attempts instant depression surrenders my mind, laying back on my bed thinking of lost time deprived of life lived, a lifeless man derives, life is detained, so wheres the life of crime? my inside dies daily, reliving that day where my impressions were left like footprints reprocussions hit, feeling sorry eversince will never rid my soul of the guilt trip written scripts addressed to victims familys, they wont quit hating my existence i cant blame there evil intents, nonstop visions replay during a death row sentence its relentless to think that my life had meaning, while a jail cell captivates me if seeing is believing, then sight must be my hell, my eyes have become decieving retrieving unfruitful thoughts, a lifetime of which will incript a suffering mind designed to kill whats left inside, i wont last long before depression takes my life im not worth suicide, deny myself the pleasure that lingers ahead, my heart aches my knees quake, both hands shutter and shake, reality turns distant, i hallucinate recipricate her voice calling my name, i reply back but interaction doesnt encounter i see myself begin to pound her, tears fall as i watch her tremble cowarding to my feet brutally beat, i return with a loaded shotgun, 2 blasts end her life, she even loved me whats wrong with me, i see her haunting my mind and soul, but its my own doing rude awakenings, dreams disturbed with the tradegy replaying, torturous crys ensuing the jail cell holds me in containment, but incarceration lies within my disrupted soul forgiveness upholds to a higher being, im destined to hells burning after the life i stole behold a nightmare so real that each day turns worst, pain and sympathy have no cure i endure a remorsive torture, a life to relive constant horror, her face so tendor and pure insecure thoughts occur, my love killed by me, as jealousy enticed a frightented brain pure hatred exists within, a lifetime to relive the moment, an eternity of unforgetable pain to tame a life and replace numbers for a name, i remain contained after one fatal mistake but i deserve my fate, cause heavens gates slammed shut, hells walls are closin in today a closterphobic wears a knotted tie, relays deep sighs of regret lookng over his life a fist gripped tight, the rope slides, choking the breathe and pain outta his life inside a message was left behind engraved on the floor, for all eyes to see here "i escaped the closing walls, and felt fates fall, but ill still relive the day after deaths call...." im sorry, but dont forgive me.
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