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03-20-05, 03:50 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Dogs for life
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Inspired by: My Mom, Dad, best friend Andy Myers all the people who've been with me when i really needed them. This song came to my right after watching the movie "BELLY" i wrote the chorus then throughout the week the whole song came to me.
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When you my dog you my dog for life existence is hard to maintain but together we'll make it through the pain and strife
I'll never stab you in the back with jealousys knife
cuz when you my dog you my dog for life Growin up nobody wanted to show me respect To busy bein jealous of the life i protect Just awaitin the day i would draw the last breath outta my chest Some people take this life as a game but to me its a test
To lay the bad times behind and move towards the best
But then there's always those people that wana pull you into their miserable place
But i ain't tryin to be another welfare case I got dollar signs infront of my eyes I'm on a paper chase
But i couldn't escape if it wasn't for my friends
Without em' i'd be left without defense
Probably find my self commitin' a violent offense Then be stuck with tryin to hop over the the federal prisons fence
Life is a straight rode and when you take bends Problems appear with no ends
And thats why i need friends {CHORUS} When you my dog you my dog for life existence is hard to maintain but together we'll make it through the pain and strife
I'll never stab you in the back with jealousys knife
cuz when you my dog you my dog for life We'd pick each other up when one would fall
We been through thick and thin we've seen it all
Remember when Chris jumped me and you nearly broke his jaw? You beat him so hard your hands were raw
That day we realized this a cruel world and friends is all we have
Since then we were like brothers the way we called each others parents mom and dad
I never really fit in at my other school everybody would reject me But when i came to Kennedy you were quick to accept me
And we was homies ever since Lookin back on the years i wouldn't have made it without friends {CHORUS} When you my dog you my dog for life existence is hard to maintain but together we'll make it through the pain and strife
I'll never stab you in the back with jealousys knife
cuz when you my dog you my dog for life I've moved 16 times in 16 years my lifestyles got me drained I'm to young to comprehend this world will someone please explain
April 13th 1998 why did Uncle Tommy have to slit his vein
I've had some rough times but always kept my head up when it rained
Used to be mad at God but sein nothin differed my anger tammed
Yet there was pieces of me that remained unchanged Sometimes it felt like i was detained and chained
To my own hate misery and pain Life felt like to much i didn't wana play the game In the end friends where to only ones that showed concern
They were the only ones to who i could turn {CHORUS} When you my dog you my dog for life existence is hard to maintain but together we'll make it through the pain and strife
I'll never stab you in the back with jealousys knife
cuz when you my dog you my dog for life
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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU Last edited by LexiKon : 03-21-05 at 02:06 PM. Reason: spelling |
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03-20-05, 04:43 PM | #2 | ||||
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Shit was nice liked the hook good structure good vocab you need to work on the flow thou but it was a hot piece was really feeling this shit it was hitting 8/10
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03-20-05, 05:32 PM | #3 | |||
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it wasnt a bad peice you could of did betta i think betta i think but i can relate to wat you sayin cus i have ppl like dat yo flow stayed on most of the time you had sum lines dat was longer den da rest dat messed it up but overall it was an ok piece 6.5/10
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03-20-05, 07:53 PM | #4 | |||||||
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yo man this was a really nice peice......if ya ever feel like doing a remix......count me in fam.......no doubt
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03-21-05, 07:05 PM | #5 | ||||
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yeah real nice piece fo sho...structure was on point...vocab needs a lil touching up in sum spots...meta's were there...& multi'z r here also overall was 8.0/10
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03-22-05, 02:47 PM | #6 | |||||||
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Thanks for the feedback i appreciate you all takin your time to read this upin
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