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| Dumb-D-Dumb |
  
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2 | 28.57% |
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5 | 71.43% |
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03-28-05, 11:35 PM
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Banned: Biting
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Stanza vs Dumb-D-Dumb
IP: 3240 794D
Battle Rules:
10 lines Check tonight Drop Tonight No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO BLIND SPIT!!! \ All Favors will Be Returned ......Atleast By Stanza Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 03-29-05 at 12:35 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
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03-28-05, 11:38 PM
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#2
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IP: 073B 523F
Dumb-D-Dumb has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-28-05 11:38 PM.
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03-28-05, 11:39 PM
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#3
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IP: 3240 794D
Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-28-05 11:39 PM.
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03-28-05, 11:52 PM
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Dumb As Fuck.
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IP: 073B 523F
yo yo...
your name is a poetry term, but man you just a clown/ ya your poetry is deep....burried six feet underground/* you wanted 10 lines, because your afraid to do more/ I understand you there....cuz I could beat you in four/ ya name is 'stanza'? well it doesnt fit, ya structures wack/ you seperate ya lines...so how is ya poetic verses intact?/** Luda in ya sig...dawg, is this guy your fuckin idol?/ Wit a role model like that...you lack talent so vital!/ man face it...you cant win this battle, broken hoe/ A loss a kick-in-the balls...this my lyrical Roshambo!/*** * Stanza is a term used in poetry **stanza mean verses bein structered into poetic form. **Roshambo means a giant kick in the nuts...watch South park 
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03-28-05, 11:52 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
..:: Stanza ::.. My rhymes *pack* punch like supermarket teens on picnics But ya *flow* is off like automatic learners driving stick-shift I set the marker for skill, like im in a Tourney~With~Flaws U couldnt *Pass The Bar* if u were and Attorney~At~Law Im mentally~advanced, while ur experimentally~in~trance My rhymes*shock u*like seeing a vampire in a glass This *dickhead* covers his * face* like a latex~rubber He claims to be str8 wen he fucks his same~sex~mother ya rhymes BORIN, like MIMES WIT MIC's & ya rhyme skill less You Make Dumb Dumbz Look Like the definition of illness |
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03-28-05, 11:59 PM
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Get Stomped.
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IP: 1359 748A
Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb
lmao good drop good structure good punches ahahaha he had good lines too but yers cut him up more which is tha point of a battle soo my vote goes to you no hate stanza Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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03-29-05, 12:15 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
 Dick rydaz  Stay The fuck outta my battle Casper |
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03-29-05, 12:25 AM
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Get Stomped.
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IP: 1359 748A
dikk rider i aint even no tha kid i just battled him faget so shut yo ass up bitch
ill vote in wutever battle i want homo
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03-29-05, 11:40 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
Dick rydaz Like i said Stay The fuck outta my battle b4 i merk Yo ass too Uppin for My votes |
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03-29-05, 01:50 PM
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb
your name is a poetry term, but man you just a clown/ ya your poetry is deep....burried six feet underground/* decent you wanted 10 lines, because your afraid to do more/ I understand you there....cuz I could beat you in four/ booooooo…nada ya name is 'stanza'? well it doesnt fit, ya structures wack/ you seperate ya lines...so how is ya poetic verses intact?/** whoa…nice Luda in ya sig...dawg, is this guy your fuckin idol?/ Wit a role model like that...you lack talent so vital!/ lol…wow man face it...you cant win this battle, broken hoe/ A loss a kick-in-the balls...this my lyrical Roshambo!/*** decent here My rhymes *pack* punch like supermarket teens on picnics But ya *flow* is off like automatic learners driving stick-shift not feelin this 1 I set the marker for skill, like im in a Tourney~With~Flaws U couldnt *Pass The Bar* if u were and Attorney~At~Law okay, decent here Im mentally~advanced, while ur experimentally~in~trance My rhymes*shock u*like seeing a vampire in a glass nada… This *dickhead* covers his * face* like a latex~rubber He claims to be str8 wen he fucks his same~sex~mother okay…kinda good ya rhymes BORIN, like MIMES WIT MIC's & ya rhyme skill less You Make Dumb Dumbz Look Like the definition of illness good both had okay verses…but dumb dumb, took this one in my opinion tho both had some wack bars, and some were good, but it seemed to me that dumb boy, came harder all the way in this battle…no hate tho
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03-29-05, 04:33 PM
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**the council**
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IP: 280C 9DE0
Voted For: Stanza
your name is a poetry term, but man you just a clown/ ya your poetry is deep....burried six feet underground/* you wanted 10 lines, because your afraid to do more/ I understand you there....cuz I could beat you in four/ ya name is 'stanza'? well it doesnt fit, ya structures wack/ you seperate ya lines...so how is ya poetic verses intact?/** Luda in ya sig...dawg, is this guy your fuckin idol?/ Wit a role model like that...you lack talent so vital!/ man face it...you cant win this battle, broken hoe/ A loss a kick-in-the balls...this my lyrical Roshambo!/*** dumb d dumb yours was a decent verse, a few average punches...i think some of your verse was mostly filler tho.....6/10 My rhymes *pack* punch like supermarket teens on picnics But ya *flow* is off like automatic learners driving stick-shift I set the marker for skill, like im in a Tourney~With~Flaws U couldnt *Pass The Bar* if u were and Attorney~At~Law Im mentally~advanced, while ur experimentally~in~trance My rhymes*shock u*like seeing a vampire in a glass This *dickhead* covers his * face* like a latex~rubber He claims to be str8 wen he fucks his same~sex~mother ya rhymes BORIN, like MIMES WIT MIC's & ya rhyme skill less You Make Dumb Dumbz Look Like the definition of illness stanza nice meta's used in your verse.....decent punches...i think this was a really close battle...think both could have come harder...but i think stanza just took the win because of the creativity in his punches...........
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03-29-05, 05:37 PM
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IP: B3E2 31E5
Voted For: Stanza
This battle goes to Stanza. First off, anyone who says something slightly "obscure" such as a reference to a stanza should give people the benefit of the doubt as to their intelligence. We just want to read what you got to say, skip the explanation por favor. But Stanza had much better punchlines whereas Dumb had only one semi witty response which was that roshambo joint. But its all good......everyone keep elevatin. you can always get better
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03-29-05, 05:56 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
Thanx for all votes .......
Uppin Lets get this battle ova with |
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03-29-05, 06:13 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 58E6 C588
Voted For: Stanza
V/Stanza...he came out wit consistent punchs mixed wit good personals an vocab i liked the opener but work on ur structure.... dumb.....u had some good lines an some played ur verse lacked consistent diss's an good personals.....No hate juss elavate.... RETURN THE FAVOR opner=s closer=s structure=tie punchs=s vocab=s personals=s overall=Stanza
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03-29-05, 07:58 PM
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.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
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IP: 6BA6 455D
Voted For: Stanza
no hate 2 any of yall heres my feedback stanza My rhymes *pack* punch like supermarket teens on picnics But ya *flow* is off like automatic learners driving stick-shift I set the marker for skill, like im in a Tourney~With~Flaws U couldnt *Pass The Bar* if u were and Attorney~At~Law Im mentally~advanced, while ur experimentally~in~trance My rhymes*shock u*like seeing a vampire in a glass This *dickhead* covers his * face* like a latex~rubber He claims to be str8 wen he fucks his same~sex~mother ya rhymes BORIN, like MIMES WIT MIC's & ya rhyme skill less You Make Dumb Dumbz Look Like the definition of illness nice punches like ur personals mother line wuz gay dont use mom shit....gay good structure easy 2 read good elevation 8/10 dumb d dumb your name is a poetry term, but man you just a clown/ ya your poetry is deep....burried six feet underground/* you wanted 10 lines, because your afraid to do more/ I understand you there....cuz I could beat you in four/ ya name is 'stanza'? well it doesnt fit, ya structures wack/ you seperate ya lines...so how is ya poetic verses intact?/** Luda in ya sig...dawg, is this guy your fuckin idol?/ Wit a role model like that...you lack talent so vital!/ man face it...you cant win this battle, broken hoe/ A loss a kick-in-the balls...this my lyrical Roshambo!/*** good personals and punches as welll sum punches aint land doe good structure work on elevatin iight battle but my vote goes 2........ v/stanza ay yall can u check out my battles b/w showtime and kid523 bof da battles need votes and ppl aint votn so please read da battle leave good adequate feedback and vote 4 da betta batttler holla back!
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