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No Biting
No D/R
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#4 Merking In Progress

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-08-05 at 12:32 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Closed - Expired / old battle win

Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-05 05:05 AM.

...Ride-On-The-Best Agreein To This Battle Like Signin-Ya-Death...
...You Like Pre Teens Eatin They Birthday Candles I'll Leave Nine-In-Ya-Chest...
...Annoint-A-Disgrace Now This Kid Believe-He-Blessed...
...I Left Ya Girl With Wet Palms N I Aint Even Meanin-Stress...
...This Kid-Is-A-Bytch N I Aint Meanin Doggie-Genders...
...you think you "Hard" I'll Leave ya "Shook Up" Like Puttin ya Dick N Balls-In-Blenders...
...Leave this man a cry-in-shame, combine ya neck and spine to redesign-ya-frame...
...This fight-has-changed, cuz I put "food coloring in ya blood" so J DOT can "dye-in-vein"...
...J Dot Thought he Could Beat Me Cuz he Claim To "Handle-Stars"...
...Candle-To-Bars Is Ur Hottness, Shyt Couldnt Be Sick...Spammin-Wit-SARS...
...Ya Rhymes Cant Ex-ceed!!!… Cause Im Just Too ‘Hard’ To ‘Smoke’ Like ‘Erect-Weed’...
...Tested-Me!!!… Now Ya Constantly ‘In Search Of Ya Balls’ Like ‘Jugglers’ Whos ‘Hands Is Emp-ty’...
...Ya Genitals-Used!!!… Youre Composed Of ‘So Much Pussie’ You Leave ‘Cannibals-Confused’!!...
...Youre Under Federal-Review!!!… Cause You ‘Spank Your Monkey’ To The Extent Of ‘Animal-Abuse’...
...I Bomb-Geeks with Strong-Speaks that'z bound to Hit "J DOT" Harder than Concrete...
...Son Ur Beyond-Weak, How u gonna say Ur not GAY when U use "Facial Creamz" between the "Wrong-Cheeks...

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J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-05 03:14 PM.

Merking #4


Murder wack emcee's, your style stay's ->> "you lose"
...thats why you Keep 'repeating yourself' like 'de ja vou'

Dim ya limelight, 5 votes for DOT, Murdz'll get merked
If 'losers had to be holy', Murdz'll be 'staying in church'

I got the greatest style possible, thats why my fans build
...ya see, murdz is like 'gameboy's', his sex is 'hand held'

'Sick' rhymes dont compare to you, unless we think of the 'flu''
And you aint a criminal, only 'barz' you seen was the 'zoo'

So stop tryna be hard, that snoop dogg sig aint you
I'll leave you wit 'bitter bee'r face like you drinkin a 'brew'

Lets not be something we not, you prolly work wit tha cops
Cause only thing you 'killed was time' when you 'break ya watch'

Voted For: J DOT

This was a real close one, but I think dot took it wit better structure. murdz, yo verse gave him competition, but i cant give u the win because i feel you came too wack wit ur structure. ur lines were too stretched. i also think dot came harder wit tha mettas.

I got the greatest style possible, thats why my fans build
...ya see, murdz is like 'gameboy's', his sex is 'hand held'

^dope shit, and i think that took it. but i think you coulve worded it a lil better.

...Ride-On-The-Best Agreein To This Battle Like Signin-Ya-Death...
...You Like Pre Teens Eatin They Birthday Candles I'll Leave Nine-In-Ya-Chest...

^couldve took dot out wit that opener, but i think tha rest of ur verse wasnt that hard. i think you slowed down a lil after that, and started to stretch ur verse, plus, your punches were all over the place, which took points down, but ur multies were dope.
close one, but my vote gota go to DOT.

hmmm. good lookin out. you like on of the few honest voters besides me. ima rtf when you get a battle open, just pm me and remind me. in the meantime. uppin this shit.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm uppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn......

good drop murdz

Voted For: J DOT

Murder wack emcee's, your style stay's ->> "you lose"
...thats why you Keep 'repeating yourself' like 'de ja vou'
7...decent opener, "de ja vu" shit was clever!!
Dim ya limelight, 5 votes for DOT, Murdz'll get merked
If 'losers had to be holy', Murdz'll be 'staying in church'
8...hot!! 2nd line was dope!!
I got the greatest style possible, thats why my fans build
...ya see, murdz is like 'gameboy's', his sex is 'hand held'
10...hotness!!! get's 10 for 2nd line...pure comedy!! LMFAO!!
'Sick' rhymes dont compare to you, unless we think of the 'flu''
And you aint a criminal, only 'barz' you seen was the 'zoo'
6...ok, not feelin the 1st line, kinda played!!
So stop tryna be hard, that snoop dogg sig aint you
I'll leave you wit 'bitter bee'r face like you drinkin a 'brew'
6...pretty good, 1st line kinda weak!!
Lets not be something we not, you prolly work wit tha cops
Cause only thing you 'killed was time' when you 'break ya watch'
7...decent closer, nice wordplay!!

OVERALL: 44/60 (73%)

...Ride-On-The-Best Agreein To This Battle Like Signin-Ya-Death...
...You Like Pre Teens Eatin They Birthday Candles I'll Leave Nine-In-Ya-Chest...
6...gud line, nice multi!!
...Annoint-A-Disgrace Now This Kid Believe-He-Blessed...
...I Left Ya Girl With Wet Palms N I Aint Even Meanin-Stress...
6...not bad, cud be better!!
...This Kid-Is-A-Bytch N I Aint Meanin Doggie-Genders...
...you think you "Hard" I'll Leave ya "Shook Up" Like Puttin ya Dick N Balls-In-Blenders...
6...aight gud bar, but 2nd line way stretched!!
...Leave this man a cry-in-shame, combine ya neck and spine to redesign-ya-frame...
...This fight-has-changed, cuz I put "food coloring in ya blood" so J DOT can "dye-in-vein"...
8...HOT! stretched a little, but i liked the 2nd line!!
...J Dot Thought he Could Beat Me Cuz he Claim To "Handle-Stars"...
...Candle-To-Bars Is Ur Hottness, Shyt Couldnt Be Sick...Spammin-Wit-SARS...
8...hot again!! nice multies and wordplay!!
...Ya Rhymes Cant Ex-ceed!!!… Cause Im Just Too ‘Hard’ To ‘Smoke’ Like ‘Erect-Weed’...
...Tested-Me!!!… Now Ya Constantly ‘In Search Of Ya Balls’ Like ‘Jugglers’ Whos ‘Hands Is Emp-ty’...
7...clever line, wordplay just keeps comin!!
...Ya Genitals-Used!!!… Youre Composed Of ‘So Much Pussie’ You Leave ‘Cannibals-Confused’!!...
...Youre Under Federal-Review!!!… Cause You ‘Spank Your Monkey’ To The Extent Of ‘Animal-Abuse’...
9...LMAO!!! spank the monkey....that shit is funny!!
...I Bomb-Geeks with Strong-Speaks that'z bound to Hit "J DOT" Harder than Concrete...
...Son Ur Beyond-Weak, How u gonna say Ur not GAY when U use "Facial Creamz" between the "Wrong-Cheeks...
8...funny shit again!!! hot closer!!

OVERALL: 58/80 (72.5%)

Damn!!! This was a close battle!! Both brought the sick shit!!! I think Murdz had better wordplay and more comedy in his verse, but J DOT took it with the personals and just overall harder punches!!! But damn hot spits from both!!

- Return the favour on one of my battles....links are in the sig!!!

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^i'll hit those up when I get home, dont trip. Thanxxx for the vote. uppin

Voted For: J DOT

Murder wack emcee's, your style stay's ->> "you lose"
...thats why you Keep 'repeating yourself' like 'de ja vou'
goodopne
Dim ya limelight, 5 votes for DOT, Murdz'll get merked
If 'losers had to be holy', Murdz'll be 'staying in church'
shitty anology, but i guess it works
I got the greatest style possible, thats why my fans build
...ya see, murdz is like 'gameboy's', his sex is 'hand held'
haha, good but wheres the personals?
'Sick' rhymes dont compare to you, unless we think of the 'flu''
And you aint a criminal, only 'barz' you seen was the 'zoo'
no
So stop tryna be hard, that snoop dogg sig aint you
I'll leave you wit 'bitter bee'r face like you drinkin a 'brew'
again, no.
Lets not be something we not, you prolly work wit tha cops
Cause only thing you 'killed was time' when you 'break ya watch'
[b]god no.

* J DOT obviously didnt have to drop hard, the simpler verse won here, idk...murdz style is like 15th RV century, not many skilled do that anymore, just a thought. but J DOT has the win, for solid punches and good structure therefore creating a good read & easy flow. word. congrats J DOT.

vote: J DOT

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seen murdz was loosin 2-0 which is bullshyt proves how many peeps d/r j dot . dots punches were basic n not hard murdz had more creative everything game boy n hand held sex n peeps think thas strong flu and zoo wtf thas mad lame. Its pathetic. murdz i cant vote dot will jus have it dq'ed but u took this ez fam

uppin this shit....................

jdot jdot jdot jdot

Voted For: Murdz

OK weak battled verse from j dot, Murdz your lines where strechted but decent

al in all there where no personals really int his battle so it was probably all prewritten, but who cares

j dot: you need to really gather up a few new words and biuld your vocab, your words where too simple and too obviouse, theres very little that hit, the game boy line was decnt but i seen that already on Rv so it looses a lil bit of points, there where alot of played concepts in your verse nothing really made me say"damn yo that was kinda ill" just take more time and dont under estamate yoru challenger

murdz: fiarly decent i like how you used a lot of multies you also had some good wordplay and metaphores that i havent heard in a while pretty good verse all in all, you had a few hotlines that made me say"WTF, pretty nice" you had some decent vocab and once again that rhyme scheme was nice...all in all you had some pretty nice shit, i dont really see how your loosing ,

jdot has alot more d/r, remeber i told you murdz D/R wins battles and this is a perfect exaple

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed

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