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Old 03-30-05, 02:00 PM   #1
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187 fo tha 2005!...(new shit from DB)

IP: B6F3 F93A

*ummm...let me say dis first...i dl'd tha ol school "deep over" beat from lime wire and i had to write to it...so here it is...its a story so taka ya time readin it...u might not like it but i love dis track...ol school rappin scheme...peep it all!!!*

[VERSE 1]
tonights tha night dat we should roll to they block,
straight maniac style lets shoot til tha bodies drop
and then roll out swiftly no if'y,
u get tha homies and i'll get tha semis
yeah, dats a dope ass plan aint it?,
knock these muthafuckaz out real quick on sum killa shit
and if a bystanda standin too close,
blast tha hoe off tha map like tha whole east coast
aim for tha torso then aim for tha head,
havin shells come out tha toasta like wonder bread
and have no remorse for what we doin,
grab tha mac and blast back if revenge is what they pursuin
hit em like dis and like dat,
cuz if we get caught tha feds wont have mercy fo us jack
so lets hurry up and go befo they hit they crib,
ride slow and hit tha lights, speed up kid

[HOOK]
YEAH, AND YA DONT STOP!
(cuz its a 1-8-7 fo tha 2005!)
YEAH, AND YA DONT QUIT!
(cuz its a 1-8-7 fo tha 2005!)

[VERSE 2]
after we crept up on dat gang of hoes,
we shot at they momma crib and smashed all her windows
then feelin good bout ourself,
we entered coney island and got burgers wit our new wealth
smashin on da grub had a nigga thirsty,
got sum kool-aid from mr.jones b-k-a rusty
then we left out tha spot,
seen sum bitch nigga mean muggin sippin coke soda pop
then i checked da cat for lookin too hard,
he got all big and started swearin to god
so me bein me i pulled my strap out on em,
shot at his legs then we all dipped out on em
but little did we know he was a undercova cop,
he called in back up and then they was at tha stop
arrested all of us on a 1-8-7 charge,
guess we shouldnt have spray painted dat gang garage
damn

[HOOK]
YEAH, AND YA DONT STOP!
(cuz its a 1-8-7 fo tha 2005!)
YEAH, AND YA DONT QUIT!
(cuz its a 1-8-7 fo tha 2005!)
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Old 03-30-05, 02:02 PM   #2
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Old 03-30-05, 02:06 PM   #3
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that was pretty mother fuckin old school.... but it should been yeah yeah and you don't stop cause its 1-8-7 on a motha fuckin cop.. thats word... 6/10
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Old 03-30-05, 02:09 PM   #4
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i know...but i wanted to change it...it goes right along wit tha beat too...i jus didnt know how to write it real structured so its written how its rapped...lmao, jus sumthin new...thanx tho

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Old 03-30-05, 04:09 PM   #5
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yo pretty good actually interesting ta read good ta see ur back holmes ...i havent seen much from u lately, this had good structure and thats a damn good song ta write too.....normaally im not into that old of old school except for Dre and Snoop so good choice keep her comin...6.5/10 yo not bad
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Old 03-30-05, 05:45 PM   #6
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good, good...thanx...like i said...im jus tryin sumthin new...i wont be droppin like dis everytime, believe me!

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