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Limited Edition 5 83.33%
Garanteed 1 16.67%
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Old 03-28-05, 05:29 PM   #1
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Old 03-28-05, 05:30 PM   #2
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Garanteed has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-28-05 05:30 PM.
 
Old 03-28-05, 05:36 PM   #3
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Old 03-28-05, 05:57 PM   #4
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Haha...Garanteed...

Check it...

Garanteed...you stupid, I've bein doin' this shit for years...
How you gonna make a comeback..? You had no highlights in ya career!
You bitch made...you should pronounce more 'bitch' than Rick James...
You gave me 10 hours to write...you couldn't win if you had six days!
You can't get laid...or get paid for your poor attempt at rap...
You poor, you live in the 'Booth'? Must be a telephone in that!
I am just statin' facts...you plain wack...my punches a body blow...
You show no records...they must be weak...same applies to your audio
Face it kid...there is no quick comeback, just like you had hoped...
When you can't spell ya name right...there is none of 'U' In dope.....
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Old 03-28-05, 06:24 PM   #5
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yea here we go, back for da first time



dis nigga want war so ima create a slight dent
battle'n me? u wont get over 50 Percent
slit ya throat, wipe the blood witcha coat
gimme a minute, we gone c if hiz body can float
lyrical assault, bring the beef to ya quick
Millitary Mindz dat ma click and ya body gone feel ma clip
fuck'n wit me, and homie its gone be do or die
and dis verse is da reason he tried to commint suicide
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Old 03-28-05, 06:41 PM   #6
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HaHa This Verse Had Alot Of Humor Man, Nice Shit Here, I Like Your Vocabulary Man, Shit Was Nice, You Had Some Tight Punches In Here, And You Had Two Good Personals That Was Crazy As Hell Man That Alone Merked It, This Verse Was Good You Had Some Multi's In here That Was Cool, You Had Some Good Word, Lol Favorite Line Was The Last Line Man That Was Hell Of Hot, Keep Doing This Man Weerd

L.E.
Well Man You Had Some Nice Punches But You Came With Self Glory On A Few Bars, That Put You Down A Few Points, You Had Okay Vocabulary, And Some Alright Personals You Had Some Decent Personals Which Was Hitting Pretty Good, Your Word Play Hmm, Okay Man Nothing Special, Structure Was Okay, Try Not To Make Dots, Unless It's A Pause Man, Over All You Had An Pretty Good Verse Man

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Old 03-28-05, 06:49 PM   #7
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This was feedback posted for Garanteed

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checkin polls.......
 
Old 03-28-05, 07:09 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by Maximus Meridius
Voted For: Garanteed


Garanteed
HaHa This Verse Had Alot Of Humor Man, Nice Shit Here, I Like Your Vocabulary Man, Shit Was Nice, You Had Some Tight Punches In Here, And You Had Two Good Personals That Was Crazy As Hell Man That Alone Merked It, This Verse Was Good You Had Some Multi's In here That Was Cool, You Had Some Good Word, Lol Favorite Line Was The Last Line Man That Was Hell Of Hot, Keep Doing This Man Weerd

L.E.
Well Man You Had Some Nice Punches But You Came With Self Glory On A Few Bars, That Put You Down A Few Points, You Had Okay Vocabulary, And Some Alright Personals You Had Some Decent Personals Which Was Hitting Pretty Good, Your Word Play Hmm, Okay Man Nothing Special, Structure Was Okay, Try Not To Make Dots, Unless It's A Pause Man, Over All You Had An Pretty Good Verse Man

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Wow...I barely used any self-glorification...one line was about it.

But w/e...uppin' for some votes.
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Old 03-28-05, 08:14 PM   #9
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damn, i gots to give dis to LE...

i think garanteeds last bar was real hard hittin.
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but LE's booth line and the career thing

id say Garanteed = 6.5/10
LE = 8/10

he had better punchlines and they were personal ones at dat.
als just used better wordplay
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Old 03-28-05, 09:26 PM   #10
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A'ight....uppity uppity...........................
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Old 03-28-05, 09:55 PM   #11
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aight, this wasn't close at all

garanteed....nothing really special in your verse...some shit you were saying was too random, like naming your crew, who cares?....and, it was pretty basic too, no real wordplay, not creative or complex punches....this, overall, was a very weak verse....maybe somethin for audio that you could spit quick or somethin, not that great of a text battle....flow was aight, structure, could be better....need ta elevate

limited....shit, you had some good stuff in there man....telephone line, made me laugh, same with your closer........but overall, you stayed consistent with your disses...didn't sway off track, actually threw some hard punches, personals were fire and really stood out in this one....rick james line was a bunk set up though....but overalll, solid verse man...oh, and opener was great too, haha, some funny shit in here, you owned him badly.......word

v/limited edish.....uh, yeah, rtf if you have time.....word
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Old 03-28-05, 09:57 PM   #12
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wow....hahaha, that one vote for garanteed....i dont even know if the guy read both verses, no offense here or anything....but this should be a KO
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Old 03-28-05, 11:15 PM   #13
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who r u faggot?

another Canadian rapper who wins text battles but cant acually rap?
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Old 03-29-05, 11:14 AM   #14
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Originally Posted by Garanteed
who r u faggot?

another Canadian rapper who wins text battles but cant acually rap?


You need to chill...I am Canadian too.

Uppin' this. I will return favors after I have my shower.
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Old 03-29-05, 03:32 PM   #15
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dont tell me to chill

i come bac and its already 1 nigga i aint even heard of thinkin he da shit
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