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Bernonedown 1 16.67%
Stanza 5 83.33%
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Old 05-10-05, 05:30 PM   #1
Stanza
Banned: Biting
 
From: NC
Stanza vs Bernonedown

IP: 3240 794D

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO

GL

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Old 05-10-05, 05:57 PM   #2
System
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Old 05-10-05, 06:00 PM   #3
Stanza
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From: NC
IP: 7BE2 A0A1


You On Some Fortune Shit, And Your Lyrical Skills Didnt Get You In Tha Tournament
Because If You Brought A Christmas Tree, Testicles Would Be Your Main Ornaments
TheNativeSon Might Strike Back With A Tight Rap Not Strong Enough 2 Kill A Track
I'll Put You In A Local Compton Oven On 250 And You'll Come Out As Guerilla Black
You Think You Hard As Shit, Stop Acting Like You Sick When Your Shit's Garbage
Because As Ugly As Tha Girls Say You Are, Its Hard 4 You 2 Say You God's Gift
Just Like Your Prior One On Ones, Everyone's Gonna Say Lyrically You Cant See Me
Your Fans (If There's Any) Wanna See Your Appearance, Lookin Like A Premature ET
You Cant Say Shit About Me Retiring Because "Native" Means Being A Senior Citizen
5 Ft. Son Of A 6 Ft. Dead Couple, Suckin Up 2 Their Genitals When You Act Innocent
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Old 05-10-05, 06:04 PM   #4
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Old 05-10-05, 06:25 PM   #5
Bernonedown
New to RV
 
IP: 7C6D 1B8D

stanza taking on bernonedown,
does he not know i will pound him in the ground,
wrecked, checked and fill in the blank________,
doesnt he know that his verse wont even rank,
hes up against the best, biggest and most feared competitor,
theres nothing that can stop me during rythme, not even STANZA, Rapverse's sexual predator,
if he thinks he can compete give him a chance,
but deep down my words have already put him in a trance
 
Old 05-10-05, 07:16 PM   #6
Stanza
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From: NC
IP: 28AD 5545

Goodluck Man ..............................Uppin for some votes
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Old 05-11-05, 10:27 PM   #7
Stanza
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From: NC
IP: 3240 794D

Uppin ..........................Uppin ....................Uppin
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Old 05-12-05, 12:14 AM   #8
ThatsWhatSheSaid
= )
 
From: New York
IP: 323F E2B9

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza- On the whole, your verse was ok, wasnt feeling the ending though, flowed alright, and punches hit harder than Bernonedowns did

Bernonedown- Wasnt really feeling your verse, punches werent strong, flow was ok

Punches- Stanza
Flow- Tie
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- Stanza
Structure- Stanza
Personals- Niether

Final Vote-------Stanza--------
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Old 05-12-05, 09:55 PM   #9
Stanza
Banned: Biting
 
From: NC
IP: 0825 899A

Wez Bez Uppin .upin Thjis Mofo

::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::WIN::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::
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Old 05-13-05, 07:13 AM   #10
Dirty Nigga
E-Style, Bitch.
 
This was feedback posted for Stanza

IP: 1E02 5605

uppin for fam......................................
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Old 05-14-05, 11:04 AM   #11
Retrospecktive
Watch & Learn
 
IP: 777B 65FF

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza,,,, killed that nigga below cause he suck'd like a mutha fucka shit man that nigga spit so weak personals weere so gay and where are the fuckin pucnhes handsdown u killed that faggot hellz yeah Vote Stanza U win this no matter what ~1~
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Old 05-15-05, 11:17 PM   #12
Stanza
Banned: Biting
 
From: NC
IP: 0825 899A

Wez Bez Uppin .upin Thjis Mofo

::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::WIN::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::
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Old 05-16-05, 12:44 AM   #13
Germ
in your system
 
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Voted For: Bernonedown

okay, this was one of the whackest battles i've read in a long time....uh stanza, you didn't really diss him at all, no punches really directed at him, structure was bad, stretched lines....everyline
uhmm, nothing really specific, no creativity....opener was just stupid as hell....wow, overall, this was a bad verse by you man....didn't even play off his name at all, no real punches, so i can't even give this to you man

bernone, man, no structure at all, but at least you tried, you gotta elevate madly.....gotta stop self-glorifying....but overall, you attempted more punches at your opponent, kept it consistent, but overall, you both did horrible, but i am giving it to bern one because he was less whack
wrecked, checked and fill in the blank________,
doesnt he know that his verse wont even rank,
^ all because of that line and it was horrible, thats how bad this battle was, but lol, funny to read, keep up both

v/bernonedown
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Old 05-16-05, 04:58 PM   #14
Stanza
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Thanx Man ,.................................................
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Old 05-16-05, 05:02 PM   #15
B.I.G.
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Voted For: Stanza

Bernonedown:
no flow
no structure
no personals
wack vocab
self-glorification

Stanza:
good flow
good structure
good vocab use
good punchlines
good wordplay

v/ Stanza
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